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A Whisper...(Suicide)

Darken gloom that haunts my light, Hostility breaks needing to fight, Hopelessness clouds the mind, Hatred rages seeming to blind, No one is here, no one is near, No one to help the lone dear, Insanity drifts for all to hear, Whispered hot against the ear, Reality slides into a dream, A whisper of control flows a stream, Temptations, Commands, Disaster spreads, Nothing matters everything is dead, Gentle words telling to kill, Picks up the knife, taking the pill, Throws back the head and pills slide down, Sight is blurred, you seem to drown, Gentle words of peaceful death, Tears shine, holding breath, Takes too long, the knifes the twist, Gently slide along thy wrist, Blood red, drips to shine, Pain erupts you hear a whine, Blackhole engulfs your entire soul, Everythings useless, there is no goal, Heaviness, Blackout, takes last breath, Surrender yourself and welcome death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/28/2016 12:08:00 PM
Natasha, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 2/5/2016 12:11:00 AM
awesome poem, keep writing. LINDA
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