A Weird Love Affair

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Stay on your side of the brook, Tiger Or else there will be a great snipper To end you running your mouth So much wild noise from you spouts See you tonight at one, rough rider

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Tonye George

Date: 7/17/2024 9:27:00 PM

Hahaha. The title caught my eye and when I saw the picture prompt, I was wondering the kind of love that would go on with them. you put it so nicely and I've seen it happen in real life. Reasons why we suspect when someone is extremely mean to someone, there might be an affair lurking by the side of the river. best wishes for the contest.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2024 2:26:00 AM

Thank you, Tonye. I am glad you saw someone informative behind it. Yes, sometimes in life people who do not belong together end up there and sometimes there is abuse going on. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2024 10:40:00 AM

Ha ha, had a chuckle picturing this couple

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/13/2024 2:34:00 PM

Sometimes in relationships it seems they are very opposite. LOL..Thanks for the visit, Jack. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 7/11/2024 8:50:00 PM

Indeed this is a weird love affair. I wonder what will happen at midnight. Will the donkey come to occupy the heart.... or the stomach of the tiger.... that's the question. :) Sara, you made me smile.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/12/2024 2:30:00 PM

I haven't decided if the donkey should live or die or if the love affair should continue. LOL..Thank you, Valsa, for the visit. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/11/2024 8:58:00 AM

One is quiet while the other one rails! Love the sternness of the first line.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/11/2024 12:14:00 PM

Kim, thanks for the nice review of my work. I appreciate you visiting and taking time to comment. Sara K