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A Weed In a Well Kept Garden

There, my eyes fixed on the yellow paving stone. Amongst a slightly tangled dandelion leaf is a little purple demon staring back at me. Just stood casually as the suns rays continue to bounce vividly off the heated ground. I notice those pointed eyes all sharp and looking frightened, that I might disrupt his peaceful unity with the warm breeze. I won't, but I'll remain enchanted by such presence. His gold earrings reflect many colours of the passing day, as they appear all the way up those elongated ears. A tiny ruby shines from a chain around his neck and there I see the hour glass dangling unthreateningly. The indents of aged muscle mould above his chest bone to form perfect pectorals. On each tiny nipple is another hoop; only, they are bronze in appearance, almost wilting in their achingness. I'm overwhelmed as I thought I recognised the curling of his mouth, a smile for me. I smile back uncertain if he would think I am afraid. Then his sharp ivory teeth poke out and I know I have done a good thing. The greens of his emerald eyes enlighten the evilness, he just wants fresh air from the summers sky as I do. A tail slivers like a python in the air with a triangular form at its end. His nails look dangerous on the edges if his twig like fingers. But I do not feel them piercing my soul. For his hour glass is not pouring any golden sand on this day, no. So I watch him leave and I am left to thoughts about a small world with the beetles, flies and mice. I find myself then laughing at such mythical fantasies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/7/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:10:00 PM
Hi Jodie, this is incredible, just love the way you have taken a everyday situation(Like A Weed) and spun this story around it, brilliant. Harry
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:39:00 AM
Very interesting poem. The purple weed with emerald eyes and ivory teeth brought you some incredible inspiration. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2011 10:10:00 AM
A big thanks for all the lovely, encouraging comments. I'm really enjoying being a part of the Soup :-)
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Date: 3/4/2011 8:33:00 AM
Very imaginative. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/4/2011 6:16:00 AM
Congrats Jodie on your dynamic win in Debbie's contest with this brilliant entry luv.. enjoy and happy weekend...
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Date: 3/2/2011 2:47:00 PM
Thought provoking write with meaningful expressions, Jodie
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Date: 3/2/2011 2:33:00 PM
Just wonderful Ilove it. Might I please suggest in the title any word 4 letters or longer be capitalized, my uncle was aREAL ;) editor and he made me aware of this! Wonderful entry! Light & Love
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