A Wayward Heart

The summer rain fell softly upon me as I traveled along
I felt alive and energized and I began to sing an old song
The weeping willows stand as statues of a forgotten past
The flower garden, with its' angel fountain, glows as I pass

The rain gave way to a bright sunny day indeed
I rushed away each of these precious moments, there was no need
I found a turtle by the walk, I let him go on by
I see everything so clearly it makes my heart cry

Beckoning my soul is the song of the bluebird far away
His gentle song tugs at my heart along my way
I chisel a little more of my sad past as I go
Oh Lord, help this country boy clear his soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/9/2013 7:36:00 PM
LOVE THE POEM ROGER........ SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:40:00 PM
Hello Roger, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... xox Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:28:00 PM
congrats Nate
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Date: 7/19/2013 9:20:00 PM
I love this, Roger...a place and time of surrender when we lean on him for rest. Well done! Congratultions on your wondeful win! Annalise
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Date: 7/19/2013 5:07:00 PM
congrats on you win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/19/2013 4:41:00 PM
Ahhh!! I like this one very much..Which picture did it describe?...Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:32:00 AM
Good morning Roger, a wonderful request... enjoyed. congratulations... Luv*** LINDA
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:00:00 PM
Hi Roger, this is nice.... congrats... luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/18/2013 6:01:00 PM
What an upbeat, descriptive poem! I can see everything passing by through your eyes as you go merrily singing on, listening to the bluebird. Congratulations on your placement in my contest!
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Date: 7/8/2013 7:19:00 PM
This is gorgeous and simply GREAT. This would make a beautiful song. I country song in fact. hah. "The summer rain fell softly upon me as I traveled along I felt alive and energized and I began to sing an old song" Love these two articulate lines. Wonderful and exquisite. Have a miraculous week. cheers! Always, J. W. Earnings (D>W>B)
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Date: 7/8/2013 7:20:00 PM
a*
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 7/8/2013 7:20:00 PM
sorry correcting meself.
Date: 7/7/2013 6:23:00 PM
so serene, I really enjoyed this though it is not free verse, your rhyme pattern is [along/song, past/pass aa,bb] [indeed/need, by/cry cc, dd] [away/way, go/soul ..it's the O sound that rhymes on the last 2 it's half rhyme which is fine] 2 more lines and you'd have a sonnet right now it's couplet or quatrain form ;) Light & Love
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Date: 7/8/2013 7:15:00 PM
:) haaha well said ! Debbie : you can be a teacha!:)
Date: 6/27/2013 6:49:00 AM
good job and lovely
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