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A Wave's Length

Born so meek, far out at sea She gathers strength, espies the shore White caps atop her apogee Escaping ocean's grip, the wave is free Foam and spray rise high and roar Born so meek far out at sea Mounting ever higher she would be A fount, from her triumphant waters soar White caps atop her apogee Sensing shoreline, ravenous, hungry Lapping up beleaguered shores Born so meek far out at sea Settling in the sand, down on her knee Peaceful calm now, powerful no more White caps atop her apogee She now recedes, stripped of pedigree Nor mist with drops of salty spray Born so meek far out at sea White caps atop her apogee

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/4/2019 6:53:00 PM

Such graceful imagery flows beautifully through your poem, Gershon. For me, the ocean is endlessly inspiring and your rich write inspires me with its elegance and artistry. A gorgeous piece, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2019 7:05:00 PM

I was hoping that you might view and review one of the villanelles, Susan. Your warm words have penetrated my heart and enriched my 4th of July. Best always, my friend. :) gw

P.S. Awtry

Date: 7/4/2019 11:52:00 AM

just gorgeous! "Escaping ocean's grip, the wave is free" Poetry high, poetic sighs... FAV

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2019 12:39:00 PM

Now I feel the sweat that I put into this one has paid off. Thank you so much for the FAVE. Best wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/4/2019 10:56:00 AM

This was almost a monorhyme also; not quite, but it bordered on the edge of one. Well done. Bravo!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2019 11:13:00 AM

A poem is a poem is a poem, I guess. :) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 7/3/2019 8:52:00 PM

This one drew me in in its depth. I love the ocean and could picture it! Well penned villanelle, you rock that style :) hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/3/2019 9:12:00 PM

Your kind words are music to my ears, Sandra. Thank you for letting me know how you feel. I'm trying my best with this villanelle form. Best wishes, Gershon

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/3/2019 5:53:00 PM

Wow, another beautiful Villanelle. Your writing is really moving along. Well done! Very nice :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/3/2019 8:03:00 PM

Thank you so much. I can feel how much you liked this one both in the lines you write and between them as well. This is so gratifying, as I really worked hard on this one. It's nice to be appreciated, as you know. Once again, thanks a million, Heidi. :) gw

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/3/2019 4:12:00 PM

Love this form of poetry, and Gershon your poem, beautifully enhances it...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/3/2019 5:13:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words about this villanelle. Appreciate your support. Best wishes, Gerhon