A Wave of Fantasy

A wave of fantasy envelops me.
It rushes over me with such a surge
that I am caught up in sweet ecstasy
to feel my love’s caresses, and the urge
to kiss his lips forever is the wave -
a tidal wave! I’m drowning in desire.
From this desire, I want no one to save
me! Cover me, desire’s wave; rise higher!
My lover’s eyes and hands caress my face.
His fingers linger here and there -everywhere
I love for them to be. Oh, fond embrace!
I’m lost in paradise without a care.
I cry out, wakened and alone to find
the wave of fantasy has left my mind.

Feb. 10, 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/3/2023 9:16:00 AM
Sounds blissful ~ congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/2/2023 11:35:00 PM
Extremely well created poem. Captivating from beginning til the final sigh. Real Poetry. Congrats
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Date: 2/12/2023 5:28:00 PM
A lovely wave of fantasy Andrea, paradise for sure… Belle
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Date: 2/12/2023 10:30:00 AM
very passionate poetry piece..too bad it wasn't real..
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Date: 2/11/2023 11:45:00 AM
Was a real shame to wake up at the end of this enthralling fantasy Andrea, I like the way it gathered pace into a tidal wave, then desire and erm wherever else it goes, a brilliant poem for the contest, cheers David
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Date: 2/11/2023 5:57:00 AM
Being lost without a care is what fantasies are all about. Alas! they tend to be ephemeral. Nicely done, Andrea.
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Date: 2/11/2023 2:25:00 AM
All fantasies come to an end. Dream on, my friend. Hugs.
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Date: 2/10/2023 11:58:00 PM
Well, every fantasy has to end some time, nice one, Andrea:)
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