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A Water Scene

High mountains reaching upward Trying to touch the fluffy clouds Evergreen trees below these mountains On the other side the same view The lake is very calm and clear Boaters rowing enjoying the view An island is spotted-it is long With evergreen trees growing The ground is flat and patchy No one dwells here It is a breeding ground For the birds to nest

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 9/6/2019 2:56:00 AM

Being a nature lover I really enjoyed reading this. Rowing out on calm clear lake surrounded by beautiful scenery, is my idea of bliss. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem :-)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2019 8:48:00 AM

Hello Anne SK.Hello so nice to meet you. I use to live near the water, and I miss it. I use to walk to the water a short walk to relax. Listening to the waves was so soothing. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/5/2019 10:31:00 AM

Birds need their space too - a wonderful piece of poetry Darlene, well done and congrats on great imagery. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/5/2019 12:38:00 PM

Blessing to you as well. Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/5/2019 12:37:00 PM

Hello Jennifer,yes the birds need their space to. Thank you for the nice comment. have a nice day my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/17/2019 6:51:00 AM

Good Morning from the USA! You got me on this one, a stunning piece of work, Darlene! I am a lover of evergreens, they are my favorite. Thank you so much...I have seen you really grow as a poet in the past months. Hope I do, too)) You were the first to welcome me here at The Soup. Thank you my friend! Panagiota Romios

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2019 7:57:00 AM

Good morning Panagiota Romios, good morning my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.Thank you Panagiota, i work hard on my poetry.Yes have as well.Yes I was the first to welcome you to the Soup.You are welcome.:Darlene

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/15/2019 7:16:00 AM

I happened to go to one of such quiet places on a holiday. It was so refreshing. Your poem took me there again. Wonderful imagery :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/15/2019 10:45:00 AM

Hello Swetha, so nice to meet you.Thank you for the lovely comment. I am so glad I brought back this memory for you. A quiet place is so nice to relax and hear your thoughts. have a nice day my friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/14/2019 4:58:00 PM

some spaces of nature are reserved for quiet roosting... a wonderful way to capture our world's environ, darlene.... huggs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2019 7:38:00 PM

Hello Nette, I hope all is well with you. Yes it is. because nature has to have room for roosting. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 5/14/2019 2:40:00 PM

Excellent write, very poetic and romantic. Thanks Darjene for your heartwarming comment on my poem The Wound

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2019 7:46:00 PM

Hello Mohammad Yamin, Thank you for the lovely comment. Your poem on the Wound, was very touching. Have a nice evening my friend. I hope you have a nice evening my friend.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/13/2019 3:19:00 PM

A lovely penned piece Darlene, so tenderly spoken. Blessings, Gordon

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/13/2019 4:28:00 PM

Hello Gordon McConnell,I hope all is well with you. For Spring weather in Canada we are having a cold Spring. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/13/2019 11:28:00 AM

A lovely verse Darlene... quite a beautiful depiction my friend...have a happy ending day...^WW^

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/13/2019 11:52:00 AM

Hello Winged Warrow, Hello I hope you had a nce Mother's Day. Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes that long island with the evergreen trees is for the birds to breed. Yet boaters enjoy their view as they pass by. have a nice day my frieend.

Cheno Achimal

Date: 5/13/2019 2:10:00 AM

lucent and pure, written with tenderness, great!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/13/2019 8:03:00 AM

Hello Cheno Achimal, I hope all is well with you today. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/12/2019 7:20:00 PM

Your eloquent words brought me to this tranquil water scene, Darlene. I enjoyed your beautiful imagery of Nature. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/13/2019 8:08:00 AM

Hello Susan Ashley, Thank you so much my friend. A water scene is so tranquil for me, whether I am by the water, or looking at at water scene. Warmth wishes my friend. Darlene

Aqua Marine

Date: 5/12/2019 4:12:00 PM

Well written imagery, Darlene! There is an important message here - some places in nature should be left undisturbed, so wildlife can increase without human interference. Lovely scene! (((HUGS)))

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/12/2019 4:48:00 PM

Hello Aque Marine, yes some ares should be left alone.Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope you had a nice day with your mom. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs:

Joseph May

Date: 5/11/2019 6:15:00 PM

Wonderful write darlene..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/11/2019 6:30:00 PM

Hello Joseph May, Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope all is well with you. have a nice evening my friend.

Robertina B.

Date: 5/11/2019 5:49:00 PM

Such a lovely free verse, Darlene.. Imagery is excellent!! I feel as if I'm there, my friend.. Have a blessed day..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/11/2019 6:31:00 PM

Hello Robertina B. I think it would be lovely to be there. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.