Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Free verse

A Water Scene

High mountains reaching upward
Trying to touch the fluffy clouds
Evergreen trees below these mountains
On the other side the same view
The lake is very calm and clear
Boaters rowing enjoying the view

An island is spotted-it is long
With evergreen trees growing
The ground is flat and patchy
No one dwells here
It is a breeding ground
For the birds to nest

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Anne E Sangster - K September 6, 2019 at 2:56 AM Being a nature lover I really enjoyed reading this. Rowing out on calm clear lake surrounded by beautiful scenery, is my idea of bliss. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem :-) Darlene De Beaulieu September 6, 2019 at 8:48 AM Hello Anne SK.Hello so nice to meet you. I use to live near the water, and I miss it. I use to walk to the water a short walk to relax. Listening to the waves was so soothing. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos July 5, 2019 at 10:31 AM Birds need their space too - a wonderful piece of poetry Darlene, well done and congrats on great imagery. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Darlene De Beaulieu July 5, 2019 at 12:38 PM Blessing to you as well. Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu July 5, 2019 at 12:37 PM Hello Jennifer,yes the birds need their space to. Thank you for the nice comment. have a nice day my friend.

Panagiota Romios May 17, 2019 at 6:51 AM Good Morning from the USA! You got me on this one, a stunning piece of work, Darlene! I am a lover of evergreens, they are my favorite. Thank you so much...I have seen you really grow as a poet in the past months. Hope I do, too)) You were the first to welcome me here at The Soup. Thank you my friend! Panagiota Romios Darlene De Beaulieu May 17, 2019 at 7:57 AM Good morning Panagiota Romios, good morning my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.Thank you Panagiota, i work hard on my poetry.Yes have as well.Yes I was the first to welcome you to the Soup.You are welcome.:Darlene

Swetha Vangaveti May 15, 2019 at 7:16 AM I happened to go to one of such quiet places on a holiday. It was so refreshing. Your poem took me there again. Wonderful imagery :) Darlene De Beaulieu May 15, 2019 at 10:45 AM Hello Swetha, so nice to meet you.Thank you for the lovely comment. I am so glad I brought back this memory for you. A quiet place is so nice to relax and hear your thoughts. have a nice day my friend.

Nette Onclaud May 14, 2019 at 4:58 PM some spaces of nature are reserved for quiet roosting... a wonderful way to capture our world's environ, darlene.... huggs Darlene De Beaulieu May 14, 2019 at 7:38 PM Hello Nette, I hope all is well with you. Yes it is. because nature has to have room for roosting. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Mohammad Yamin May 14, 2019 at 2:40 PM Excellent write, very poetic and romantic. Thanks Darjene for your heartwarming comment on my poem The Wound Darlene De Beaulieu May 14, 2019 at 7:46 PM Hello Mohammad Yamin, Thank you for the lovely comment. Your poem on the Wound, was very touching. Have a nice evening my friend. I hope you have a nice evening my friend.

Gordon Mcconnell May 13, 2019 at 3:19 PM A lovely penned piece Darlene, so tenderly spoken. Blessings, Gordon Darlene De Beaulieu May 13, 2019 at 4:28 PM Hello Gordon McConnell,I hope all is well with you. For Spring weather in Canada we are having a cold Spring. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.

Winged Warrior May 13, 2019 at 11:28 AM A lovely verse Darlene... quite a beautiful depiction my friend...have a happy ending day...^WW^ Darlene De Beaulieu May 13, 2019 at 11:52 AM Hello Winged Warrow, Hello I hope you had a nce Mother's Day. Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes that long island with the evergreen trees is for the birds to breed. Yet boaters enjoy their view as they pass by. have a nice day my frieend.

Cheno Achimal May 13, 2019 at 2:10 AM lucent and pure, written with tenderness, great! Darlene De Beaulieu May 13, 2019 at 8:03 AM Hello Cheno Achimal, I hope all is well with you today. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Susan Ashley May 12, 2019 at 7:20 PM Your eloquent words brought me to this tranquil water scene, Darlene. I enjoyed your beautiful imagery of Nature. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan Darlene De Beaulieu May 13, 2019 at 8:08 AM Hello Susan Ashley, Thank you so much my friend. A water scene is so tranquil for me, whether I am by the water, or looking at at water scene. Warmth wishes my friend. Darlene

Aqua Marine May 12, 2019 at 4:12 PM Well written imagery, Darlene! There is an important message here - some places in nature should be left undisturbed, so wildlife can increase without human interference. Lovely scene! (((HUGS))) Darlene De Beaulieu May 12, 2019 at 4:48 PM Hello Aque Marine, yes some ares should be left alone.Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope you had a nice day with your mom. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs:

Joseph May May 11, 2019 at 6:15 PM Wonderful write darlene.. Darlene De Beaulieu May 11, 2019 at 6:30 PM Hello Joseph May, Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope all is well with you. have a nice evening my friend.

Robertina B. May 11, 2019 at 5:49 PM Such a lovely free verse, Darlene.. Imagery is excellent!! I feel as if I'm there, my friend.. Have a blessed day.. Darlene De Beaulieu May 11, 2019 at 6:31 PM Hello Robertina B. I think it would be lovely to be there. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice evening my friend.