A Wandering Soul In Exile

My youth was too brief
and whenever I felt distraught, 
I clutched my belief:
to give faith a defined worth;
free, but not truly liberated
as a wandering soul in exile:
reminding itself of how it inwardly bled
amid thoughts that knew no minimal dire!

Freedom has the dearest prize:
I either acclaim it with excitement,
or I lose it to that folly which destroys life;
nothing about incomprehension is an efficacious attempt
which enriches a rebellious mind full of rage and enmity,
but can I comprehend its enormity?  

A disconsolate person is a wandering soul in exile,
lacking insight and enthusiasm: a self-evident liar  
who's never warned of terrible consequences, 
dispelling honor and truth, feeding on worthless pride: 
to disassemble what was built with enormous sacrifices;
always distrustful, arrogant and unappreciative of uprightness,
pleasing in discord and disunity to satisfy an arrogant ego 
without self-esteem to continually spread sorrow!

How can anyone fasten with chains a rightful spirit,
to enslave it and enforce a punitive silence?
The morning star is most beautiful before sunrise,
mortals are most admired when they inspire, captivate 
and show endearment in their true and endless emotions:
to evoke their past liberties that time has left intact!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 3, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Andrew, Congrats on your any poem win. SKAT <3
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November 3, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Congrats on ur superb win Andrew with this amazing write!
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November 2, 2015 at 11:49 PM
Andrew, Congrats on the win. Enjoy my newest blog "One More Thing" if you'd like. Always ~LINDA~
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June 19, 2013 at 5:35 PM
Nice win, my friend. I tip my hat to you in congratulations.... Jake
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June 19, 2013 at 2:42 PM
Andrew - Congratulations on your win with this very wise and insightful poem - Tim
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June 19, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Hi Andrew, I'd like to say ~CONGRATULATIONS~ always & forever * LINDA
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June 19, 2013 at 9:17 AM
ANDREW, ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME POEM. *LUV ~SKAT~
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December 29, 2008 at 1:36 AM
Nice poem Andrew, the word play is great, excellent imagery. I invite you to read my work...Raul
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