A Wall In the Woods

The wall would not hinder my fall,
the tumble i take for memory’s sake.
Childhood sees fairylands, vast —
but as small as a neighborhood lake.
The woods with its creek and crawfish,
an older kid pinching friend’s shirt, kicking
breathtakingly loud over the ground.
The girl ought not get her feet wet,
too sensitive and shy, not a tomboy.
We’d run back to the consoling wall,
with bunny paws, spring to our mamas’ ground,
never speak of tattletales…
after all, it was my friend’s fault
for perusing the big boys fort.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hind Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 7:14 PM
I am taken back in time. What an interesting kid you must have been. Very thankful for your sharing.
Callus Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 1:44 PM
Your take on this wall topic is delightful and creative, Kim. Congratulations on such a fine win. Regards // pau
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Fowler Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Nostalgic Kim. Nicely done! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Kauffman Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 9:45 PM
Such a wonderful and creative picture of childhood, sneaking up on and invading a fort. Brings back memories, Kim. Congratulations on yuour win!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Thank you, Sam!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 8:26 PM
It is always a friend who leads us into trouble. Smirk. Smirk.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Right! Let’s go buddy! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 11:41 AM
Greatly imaginative take on a difficult subject.~~
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Wolf Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Love the imagination in this write, Kim... And those 'bunny paws.' Oh, my! G.L. in the contest. ~ Peeking Thomasina
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 1:54 PM
You never fail to make me giggle! “Bunny Paws”
Koplin Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 10:39 AM
Well done Kim! Great take on this contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Thank you, Mark!
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