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A Wall In the Woods

The wall would not hinder my fall, the tumble i take for memory’s sake. Childhood sees fairylands, vast — but as small as a neighborhood lake. The woods with its creek and crawfish, an older kid pinching friend’s shirt, kicking breathtakingly loud over the ground. The girl ought not get her feet wet, too sensitive and shy, not a tomboy. We’d run back to the consoling wall, with bunny paws, spring to our mamas’ ground, never speak of tattletales… after all, it was my friend’s fault for perusing the big boys fort.

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Date: 10/18/2020 1:44:00 PM
Your take on this wall topic is delightful and creative, Kim. Congratulations on such a fine win. Regards // pau
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2020 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 10/17/2020 6:59:00 AM
Nostalgic Kim. Nicely done! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2020 7:58:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 10/16/2020 9:45:00 PM
Such a wonderful and creative picture of childhood, sneaking up on and invading a fort. Brings back memories, Kim. Congratulations on yuour win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2020 7:58:00 AM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 10/13/2020 8:26:00 PM
It is always a friend who leads us into trouble. Smirk. Smirk.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2020 9:34:00 AM
Right! Let’s go buddy! :)
Date: 10/9/2020 11:41:00 AM
Greatly imaginative take on a difficult subject.~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 10/9/2020 11:23:00 AM
Love the imagination in this write, Kim... And those 'bunny paws.' Oh, my! G.L. in the contest. ~ Peeking Thomasina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2020 1:54:00 PM
You never fail to make me giggle! “Bunny Paws”
Date: 10/9/2020 10:39:00 AM
Well done Kim! Great take on this contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/9/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thank you, Mark!

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