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A Walk To Remember

The walk to the grave
Of my adopted mother
Took everything for me to be brave

Standing there and listening
To what the minsiters said
About the life she had been living

The deeds she had done while here
Meals she had prepared for many
How people thought her a dear

This walk is a walk to remember
Can I walk in the steps
The steps in life she rendered

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/23/2009 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Sara, on your success in Constance’s “A Walk to Remember” contest with this heartfelt poem. Life does have many walks. And a good example is the best walk to leave behind. Excellent write. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/18/2009 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:35:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest Sara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/16/2009 8:53:00 PM
Dear Sara, congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:37:00 PM
congrats on the HM in the contest, very sad poem, I remember the day too. I started to write about it but couldn't put it into words.
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:38:00 PM
A wonderful trip through a difficult time....Well done Sara! Congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:09:00 PM
Hi Sara, beautifully written. Congrats on your win! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:45:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 10/9/2009 11:32:00 AM
so sad but i hope that was your stregnth to carry on
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Date: 10/7/2009 12:09:00 AM
Best wishes withy this on Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 10/6/2009 8:44:00 AM
Thanks, Sara for your response on my poem. This piece touched close to home. Your work is very inspiring. Keep writing! Donielle S.
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Date: 10/5/2009 10:54:00 AM
very touching, nicely done
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Date: 10/5/2009 6:18:00 AM
A walk to remember... Awesome title, nifty write Sara......As always.......:JP]
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