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cerulean sea washes away footprint trail palm trees sway on breeze A Nature Themed Haiku with Color Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin Checked with how many syllables 1/24/20

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Date: 2/18/2020 8:20:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Jan.
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Date: 1/29/2020 11:18:00 PM
How lovely. Jan. Congrats on the big win. Joe took internet away he's redoing our basement. I'm worried about posting for contests over the weekend. Also cant grade all my tests this weekend. And no Netflix. Guess that gives me lots of time just to work on poems. On cell phone right now. Will not do emails till after weekend.
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Date: 1/29/2020 9:44:00 AM
Vivid imagery, Jan. Congratulations on placing first! Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/29/2020 4:08:00 PM
Thanks paul:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2020 6:17:00 AM
Palm trees, the ocean and footprints. Remarkable. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 1/29/2020 4:08:00 PM
Thanks kai:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2020 3:36:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great nature themed haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thanks anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2020 1:06:00 AM
Jan, Congratulations. Great imagery and I love the allieration in the first line.
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Date: 1/29/2020 4:00:00 PM
Thanks sam:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2020 9:26:00 PM
Wow..Beautiful imagery Jan..Great win..
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Date: 1/29/2020 4:00:00 PM
Thanks jenish:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2020 6:55:00 PM
Gorgeous, Jan. Congrats on your 1st place win! hugs xx
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Date: 1/29/2020 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2020 6:07:00 PM
I want to be sitting alongside the imagery you painted here! Congrats on first place!
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Date: 1/29/2020 3:55:00 PM
Thanks so much kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2020 5:33:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful haiku with gorgeous imagery! :)
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Date: 1/29/2020 3:45:00 PM
I'm delighted with my first place thank you so much:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/27/2020 11:32:00 AM
This is perfect.
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Date: 1/29/2020 3:45:00 PM
Thanks caren:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/26/2020 8:18:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Jan. Great contest entry! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 1/29/2020 3:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Gershon:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/25/2020 4:44:00 PM
Beautiful Jan! :)
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Date: 1/26/2020 2:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/25/2020 2:09:00 AM
I can just see it Jan, beautiful image. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 1/26/2020 2:42:00 AM
cheers Tom:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/24/2020 5:32:00 PM
I want to be there next to those foot steps, nice one Jan xo
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Date: 1/26/2020 2:41:00 AM
thanks Pixie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/24/2020 3:29:00 PM
makes me wan to go to the beach. Good luck, Jan
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Date: 1/24/2020 5:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/24/2020 3:15:00 PM
Great imagery, Jan, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/24/2020 5:11:00 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/24/2020 2:42:00 PM
There's something quite sad about seeing footprints in the sand, but even more so when it's only one, and that one leads to the sea. I hope he/she is just out for a swim. Your Haiku is super, Jan.
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Date: 1/24/2020 5:09:00 PM
Thanks for the insightful comment Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/24/2020 1:37:00 PM
Perfect! xomo
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Date: 1/24/2020 5:06:00 PM
Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/24/2020 12:52:00 PM
So much to think about in 3 little lines. Including something that waltzes in to erase the past in mind. Cooling the spirit. The wind knowing a secret, or waving a welcomed salutation. Foreshadowing of steady sail and new breaths of new beginnings. Golden sunset. GOLDEN POEM!
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Date: 1/24/2020 1:13:00 PM
I LOVE your interpretation of the poem thanks Jude:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/24/2020 12:41:00 PM
A PERFECT UK title! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/24/2020 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx