A Walk Along the River

Walk  in the river.
As i walk the river banks 
The water seems to flow as if it was following me.
The trees with their branches sum the touch of water to drink.
The river is so quiet that it is nice to walk along just to think.
The birds are flying above the trees ready to take a fish they might see.
The sun it sets and the glare makes the water shine in different colors.
I enjoy a walk along the river and to see all that there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/11/2014 10:03:00 AM
Applause to your wonderful work Harold! :-) One Love, Teddy.
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love the river, too. God Bless you and happy writing. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/7/2014 4:16:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning free verse in the contest "River Walk",Harold ! - Well done, I like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2014 11:05:00 PM
congrats , harold . it's a nice poem. I just hope you will do haiku next time you enter a haiku contest. I would like to see how you do one.
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Date: 9/6/2014 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations, Harold on a fine win! Excellent write. Pandita
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Date: 9/6/2014 7:15:00 AM
I am glad to see this got placed in the contest it is a beautiful write:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/5/2014 11:19:00 PM
Harold, I honored the poem, because it was nice, however I asked for a haiku or senryu.... Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/26/2014 11:33:00 AM
Wonderful imagery I especially love the idea of the trees drinking the water
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