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A Walk To Remember

Watching busy banquette that morn, memories flashed back in my mind. The day we walked together, holding each others hand. We were so happy that moment, I've seen it with the glaze in your eyes. A minute I want to hold on forever, Never allow each seconds to die. The cold of wind kissed on my cheeks, has gone when you whisper goodbye. The next train is comin', A walk of love I still remember.

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Date: 1/9/2014 1:39:00 PM
Nice poem indeed,soo saad ending,well hope to see you drop by and comment on my new inspirational poem,thanks and bye for now
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Austin Eseke
Date: 1/13/2014 4:40:00 PM
especially my poem on FAITH..Thanks..bye nand huggs
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/9/2014 2:07:00 PM
thank you for your visit and comment , Austin.. =)) ..i'll check out of your hidden treasures too.. ^__6
Date: 1/9/2014 12:39:00 PM
This poem is beautifully done....Caleb
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/9/2014 2:07:00 PM
thank you ,Caleb :)) huggs!!! ^__*
Date: 1/8/2014 5:59:00 PM
very good poem Aiyah, filled with good memories and tears to end. Someone will come along and turn your frown upside down. Michael
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/9/2014 9:54:00 AM
thank you for an another warm comment, Mike!!! :))
Date: 1/8/2014 5:43:00 PM
Wonderful visual piece,So romantic but sad ending. must have been some day.sending you my best wishes. Pete.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/8/2014 5:57:00 PM
thank you for dropping by, Pete :)) best wishes to you, too =^_*

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