A Wakening

In life I, alone and
untroubled, sought
company and solace,
in equal proportions.
The more I found,
the greater the want.
Impetuosity replaced caution.

Mistakes were many,
successes so seldom.
The thrill of the game
became all important.
Rush headlong further
toward disappointment
Ignoring well intended advice

Now, intent faded,
resentment settles, 
as a storm. I dream,
I recall friendly days,
and need my Love to keep me warm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 4:41 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 28, 2016 at 1:04 PM
ray, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX --
A  Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Ray, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
Delaney Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 4:41 PM
Welcome Ray: This kind of introspection is good for the soul...SuZ
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June 27, 2013 at 8:57 AM
love is always something that can keep you feeling at home and safe, with much love needed a lovely write, enjoyed, ~always, Linda
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