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A Wakening

In life I, alone and untroubled, sought company and solace, in equal proportions. The more I found, the greater the want. Impetuosity replaced caution. Mistakes were many, successes so seldom. The thrill of the game became all important. Rush headlong further toward disappointment Ignoring well intended advice Now, intent faded, resentment settles, as a storm. I dream, I recall friendly days, and need my Love to keep me warm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/2/2024 4:41:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:04:00 PM
ray, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX --
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:50:00 PM
Ray, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2013 4:41:00 PM
Welcome Ray: This kind of introspection is good for the soul...SuZ
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Date: 6/27/2013 8:57:00 AM
love is always something that can keep you feeling at home and safe, with much love needed a lovely write, enjoyed, ~always, Linda
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