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Moonlight creeps through the writhing woodland as Arion walks alongside me—upward toward the lone mountain. We had trekked for miles and the way was wearisome, heavy fog in its obscuring fidelity stalking our every step. Winds shrieked around us like dissonant flutes— high pitched, fortissimo screams that died in and died out dismally. They reminded me of my own undulating doubts manifesting into fits of malignant mess— but the steady sound of our unified steps soothed my panicking heart—tears flower my eyes, dropping like dew. Soon—as many storms do— the winds died away along with my fears. That is when the mockingbird began to stridently trill in the distance, its venting variations vaguely familiar. Arion and I stopped in a flat clearing, stunned by its clarity, listening intently to her songs. Timelessness touched the forest as melodies touched our hearts. When her trills ceased, I first witnessed the tears of my loyal companion. Somehow, they made him younger and freer. Excitement sprouted from his eyes like wildflowers witnessing their first dawn. He wiped the tears away with his sleeve and beamed like a sunrise. “For just one moment—one moment, she sounded like my mother,” he stammered. I grasped his hands and held them to my heart. Arion looked up to the sky, above the circle of trees, as if he recognized a face in the midnight expanse. We made a camp and settled silently in the clearing. The last thing we remember before closing our eyes was the overhead flutter of shadowed wings and a gentle sigh beyond the pines. (note: this is the third part of an epic about Arion I shared a while ago. The first and second pieces are “Little Glistening Salmon” and “Ocarina Steps”)

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Date: 2/17/2025 7:10:00 PM
"Like wildflowers witnessing their first dawn...Tears flower my eyes, dropping like dew." You have done a wonderful job balancing all the natural elements with the spectrum of emotion expressed Laura. Magic is alive in the world along with your beautiful sensitivities...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/19/2025 5:34:00 AM
Cherish your thoughts always, Justin. Magic is certainly alive in the world, within ourselves, within you. <3
Date: 2/17/2025 8:53:00 AM
Laura, a wonderful way to connect the present adventure with memories from the past. The way you make an ongoing adventure really makes a wonderful read...I'm never sure what to expect and so as you reveal, it's just pure fun and pleasure. Anyway, take care and smiles for beautiful days now and in the future! These epics are wonderful!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/19/2025 5:32:00 AM
Arion is a continuous motif not only in my poetry but in my mind . His music, his poetry speaks to me… you are so kind to visit so many pieces of mine in one day. Thanks for making me feel special. <3

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