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A Visit From Massacre Fairy 2nd Half

PLEASE READ PART 1 BEFORE READING BELOW It was covered in black fur from its head to its toes Its small eyes glimmered white like the sight of fresh snow Razor, jagged teeth a quarter meter long Its bite was considered to be bear trap strong No lips, no ears, no nose on its face Instead there were just holes, just a bunch of empty space. The fingers and nails grew together as one Sharper than blades which were forged by the sun And it carried a sack, but in it were trolls That would jump out to grab the tormented souls The drawing of the souls was the vilest thing to see They shrieked and moaned, then begged for mercy But before this act the hearts were ripped out And the trolls gobbled them up without a shadow of a doubt But then a glare of its eye and a twitch of its head The trolls jump back in the sack or they knew they’d be dead And it shrieked the same five words as it left like when it came A bellow from hell, you could say sounded the same If you were to hear these words, you could put its reign to an end So with its saw-like teeth, your tongue it rends. And when it’s complete, with no time to stall The demons dash away, Dash away, Dash away all! It is said to come back every fifty-sixth year On the night before Christmas like this time here To repeat the bloodbath on a town such as this Leaving them no time for one final wish So sleep light on a night which is said to be merry For you might receive a visit from the Massacre Fairy. Please rate after reading both parts =0)

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Date: 7/5/2011 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kristina. May your poetry bring inspiration to others as they read it. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2011 4:07:00 PM
Smile -- i love your beauties title to this poe in motion my dear and, i just pick-up your treasures com from 3/31 -- been a bit busy my dear but no, no more riddles for you, just, sweeet kisssess; will that do?? -- love, Always, christopher ~
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Date: 2/21/2011 11:23:00 PM
Words are my passion in life like a woman for a woman or a man for a man. A feeling that seems never to be complete. Yet your words feel the void. Good write! I did take some of your advice. That's what I want from you.
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Date: 2/18/2011 3:06:00 AM
Kristina Love it .....hope it don't come my way hehe Don
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Date: 2/8/2011 11:13:00 PM
Kristina, this is a very interesting way of doing the Night before Xmas, the goriest one I ever read! I think you must love those Friday the 13th kind movies. Uniquely done. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/8/2011 10:51:00 PM
Joe..I love the santa claws idea! Damn why didn't i think of that??? Nice=))
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:13:00 PM
I wonder what would happen if The Massacre Fairy arrived at the same time as Santa's alter ego (Santa claws). A royal rumble between the elves and the trolls perhaps. I see a pay per view special coming. Well done.
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Date: 2/8/2011 1:51:00 PM
Quite different than Santa Claus...I know=0) Thank you for your comments! I appreciate them all...I also love critique...so please dont hesitate. Oh...by the way...please rate it for me...I would appreciate that=0)
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Date: 2/8/2011 11:29:00 AM
Terrific angle having a massacre fairy Kristina, nice one....:)
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:10:00 AM
aww nice poem, and thanks for your kind coments, i used to love it when i was litle and lieved in tooth fairy LOl God bless from diane
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Date: 2/8/2011 5:20:00 AM
I am glad you liked it! Its always nice to hear what other...who are in the same field as you think about your work. Thank you
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Date: 2/8/2011 4:51:00 AM
Now I have read both the parts!Way to go Kristina!Good descriptive work,nice flow with rhyming.I think the form of this poem is couplet.--kashinath
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