A Vision of a Child

Under the Christmas tree sits a nativity scene in the old town square. I sit on a rustic wood bench and reminisce on the stories I’ve been told about Jesus being born on Christmas Day. When all of a sudden, I hear movement in the bushes; I turn my head and look over my shoulder. With a sudden fright, a tall pure white stallion with feathered wings, steps forward and says, “My name is Peg, climb on my back and I’ll take you to where it all began.” I arose to my feet and got on Peg’s back, held on tightly to his mane. He galloped off at full speed facing into the wind and took off soaring into the night full of stars, being guided by a large, bright, glowing star. 

      Peg turned his head and said, “That is the Christmas Star ahead.” 

      As I looked down below, I saw coming from the east, three men. Could they be the three Wise Men?    

      As we reach the star we slow down to a town. Peg said, “This is Bethlehem down below.” 

      Peg starts descending close to a stable and lands. I anxiously dismount and we both walk towards the stable. My spirit was overpowered with awe, there in the small dim lite stable, we found a babe wrapped in swaddling clothes, lying in a manger, with his mother Mary kneeling beside Him. 

      The shepherds that were watching their flocks near the stable also came all elated, one of them said, “An angel appeared and told us a Savior, the Messiah, had been born and that we would find Jesus laying in a manger. So, we immediately came to see if truly Jesus our Savior was born.”

      The three Wise Men arrived and said, “Where is He who has been born King of the Jews? For we have seen His Star in the East and have come to worship Him.” They gazed at the young Child and immediately fell down and worshiped Him, they presented their gifts to him of gold, frankincense, and myrrh.

      We stayed for a while in admiration of our Lord Jesus. 

     After a time, Peg said, “I need to get you back before you are missed.”  

      Together we flew into the endless night back home to the Christmas tree where I had been before. 


11/18/2014 © 2014
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La France Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Christmas Poems Contest, wonderfully penned, well done, Constance
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December 14, 2024 at 3:59 AM
Congrats! Merry Christmas to you and your family. God bless you.
mysore Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 9:49 PM
Happy Christmas dear poet. Cheers!!!
Healey Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Congrats on your placement, Eve. Have a safe and blessed Christmas. Cheers from Canada. Jim
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 4:46 PM
Lovely example for your contest, Eve!! And a belated Congrats on a contest win I see here.
Gauthier Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Awesome poem, Eve. I love it ~
Watt Avatar
April 28, 2020 at 11:11 AM
Eve, what a lovely visit that would have been! It is good to remember in the midst of all the joys of our Christmas celebrating the simple, yet powerful reason we are celebrating. Immanuel, God with us! Amen to your amazing tale. Hugs ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 2:59 PM
What a lovely Christmas story, Eve.
La France Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 5:04 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Christmas writing challenge with this beautifully penned story, I loved it !
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 3:26 AM
A lovely tale sprinkled with the holy birth Eve. Congratulations on your top win! Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo
Na Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 2:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Eve
Venter Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Beautiful, mixing fact and fiction
Haight Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Eve, congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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December 17, 2015 at 3:37 PM
EVE, Congrats on your old best poem. HUGS **SKAT**
Tor Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Awesome write Eve enjoyed reading this heartfelt write about our Lord and Christmas. The reason for the season. Congratulations!!
Roper Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 8:59 PM
Thank you, Michael! Merry Christmas!
Vaso Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 12:49 AM
Eve this painting is amazing, this only makes me wish to see more!!!!!!!!!!
Roper Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Thank you, Arthur; for, lifting my spirits, I might place more with poems relating to the paintings if I am able. I just started painting again after 9 years. I had to stop painting in 2002, I was 55, and I couldn't focus resulting in a tumor removal in 2005 on the left side of my brain. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
Kayode Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:28 PM
Thank you for this brilliant story Eve and congrats on the win...huggs
Roper Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:37 PM
Kayod5, thank you for your wonderful compliment and visit, I enjoyed reading your "Santa is Coming" good write. Blessings to you
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations on this wonderful poem Eve.
Roper Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:05 PM
Thank you, Brenda, you are always welcome to come back any time. Your “The Elves Snow Party” was pretty outstanding. Blessings eve
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December 6, 2014 at 7:54 AM
What a wonderful way to tell the Chrismas story! Congratulations.
Roper Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Richard, thank you,for your visit and wondrful compiment. Blessings eve
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 7:10 AM
enjoyed this wonderful story, congrats on the win
Roper Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Thank you, Dr, for your compiment. Blessings eve
May Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 9:11 PM
Great story Eve....Congrats on your win
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 9:15 PM
Joseph, thank you for the compliment Blessings oxox eve
Yvonne Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Just beautiful Eve, Congratulations on your first place win!
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Maurice, thank you,and congratulations on yours. Blessings XOXO eve
Johnson Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 5:01 PM
A great story and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Joyce, thank you, for your compliment and visit. Blessings xoxo eve
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 3:34 PM
such a delightful story Eve many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Jan, thank you so much. May your weekend be blessed eve
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December 5, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Eve, you have outdone yourself with this magical Christmas fantasy write! Just a lovely story, my friend! Bravo and congratulations on your great win! Pandita
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Pandita, thank you so much for your wonderful comment and news ? . Blessings to a sweet person eve
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