A Vision, Enticing and Fair

Her face
Her haunting eyes
   The luscious red lips...

Shuffling midst leaves between his feet
  Meandering emotions of desire
A fog in his head, swimming upstream
  Then lifting, replaced by the pure heat of fire

Her soft auburn hair
The slope of her shoulders
  The sway of her hips and her waist...

He plots his next move midst mounting fear
  Would he ever whisper his passion in her ear
The rain poured down now, soaking his clothes
  He'd ring her doorbell, give her that rose

Aloft in a mist
Lighter than air
  A vision, enticing and fair...

He'd purchased the flower, shaved and showered
  Hustled cross town, though late was the hour
Finger poised on her doorbell, his decision unmade ~
  At the sight of two silhouettes intertwined on her shade
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Krutsinger Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:52 PM
Oh man what a letdown! " At the sight of two silhouettes intertwined on her shade" I did NOT see this coming! Wonderfully penned.
Pettit Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Reading your fine work reminded me of the big hit song of yesteryear, "Silhouettes" by the Rays.
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 6:40 PM
'Two silhouettes on the shade...' Yup, the good old days. Thanks, Robert
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:50 PM
The guy doesn’t get the girl and oh boy did he want her. Great!
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 4:03 PM
At least she never knew of his desire... Cheers, Gershon
Sands Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Wow, this brings the reader straight into the experience Gershon. Excellent :)
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 4:02 PM
Glad to hear that this poem was 'felt,' Heidi. Thanks for telling me. Appreciated, Gershon
Ligon Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Sounds lovely, then the plot twist... Enjoyed the romantic details.
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 3:59 PM
Thank you for letting me know, Juliet. Smiles, Gershon
Hankins Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 9:34 PM
Oh my, this is disappointing to him...and me. I didn't foresee this, GW. I guess she never knew.
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 3:53 PM
Nope. She never knew. Better that way, methinks. Cheers, Gershon
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