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A Village Encounter

From Queens to Manhattan, I rode the subway. I will never forget that late spring day, when I walked into that Greenwich Village café. This young girl practically stole my heart away. With a long white dress, and a six string guitar, she was just another wannabe star. I was sitting not far away from her at the bar. Between sips of my glass of seltzer, I listened to each sweet note sung by her. The end of her performance brought a light ovation. She sat next to me for some casual conversation. After an informal introduction came a sweet little smile. I was attracted to her all the while, even though she was Jewish, and I a gentile. I told her I also performed in a band. She wrote her phone number on my left hand. Everything with this female appeared just right. I asked if I could see her tomorrow night. She emphatically said “okay” and smiled with delight. Later that night, disappointment would encumber. When I tried to call her, I got a wrong number.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/5/2011 8:46:00 AM
Sort of reminds me of a movie I saw.....of bittersweet memories, and "what might have been". Nicely done !!
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Date: 2/5/2011 7:23:00 AM
This is one beautiful poem Robert. Definately an encounter to remember.
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:32:00 AM
Just luv this one Robert.. your intro lines brought me back to my many weekends in NYC back in the day.. a lovely piece on the plight of romance my friend.. cannot say thankxxx enough for your expert eyesight on my sports entry for Paula..my spell check does not always work well with my anti virus and I tend to be a super fast typer ..so this is how this happened... appreciate the luv my friend.... thankxx for looking out for the "Sweetheart" ..with luv..
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:18:00 AM
Good one..She knew how to handle the situation to take care of herself..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by,,,Sara
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Date: 2/5/2011 1:44:00 AM
Maybe it faded on your hand, Robert? If not, shame on her for misleading you. Still, the poem made me laugh. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/5/2011 1:40:00 AM
Her misfortune for sure. Great story! and Great writing, Robert.
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:56:00 PM
oh, my, what a disappointment. Crap, I hope it was not deliberate on her part. All the while I was thinking there was gonna be some twist. Like she had written her name on your arm and years later you realized she had become this famous singer or something. haha. Good think you were not in Soho and the singer was Lola! Luv, Andrea
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