A Vampire Quatern

The vampire had another bite;
Her victim didn’t wake and scream.
She wasn’t hungry on that night,
And left him in a pleasant dream.

But roaming through the sleepy town,
The vampire had another bite -
And spat the blood out with a frown:
It tasted awful; quite a fright.

She hunted swooping from a kite,
And landed on a window sill.
The vampire had another bite,
But wasn’t really hungry still.

She’d lost her appetite, she said,
And told a shrink about her plight.
He shrugged. ‘It’s all inside your head.’
The vampire had another bite…

Written 26th April for Andrea’s Quatern contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 8/27/2014 10:09:00 AM
Why haven't I read more of your witty pieces? They're great!
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:53:00 PM
hI JACK, Congratulations, in Andrea's awesome Do You Know Quatern? Contest... happy for all the winning poems.. Linda
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Date: 5/12/2014 10:38:00 AM
a haunting take on the theme, jack... really unique!.. best of cheers on your high spot!.. huggs
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Date: 5/11/2014 9:36:00 PM
Truly different and well done, Jack. I am glad I didn't have to judge these. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/11/2014 4:44:00 PM
hahaha. I just knew this had to be my friend the vampire writer. I LOVED this except I was not crazy for the line where you had her fly in on a kite!! Congrats, Jack. Definitely the funniest of them.
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Date: 4/27/2014 4:47:00 PM
Well, I hope that it doesn't land on your windowsill..Reads like a winner for Andrea's contest..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2014 9:42:00 AM
When she felt a little down, she could've just tried a new town. And when she found the need to feed. She would have had more choice to bleed.
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Date: 4/27/2014 9:16:00 AM
great write. good luck with the contest. hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2014 9:13:00 AM
Poor shrink! Very imaginative... Really, really enjoyed the ending... You're good my friend!
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Date: 4/27/2014 7:53:00 AM
Great write Jack, You know what they say, once bitten....
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