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A Valentine Wish Come True

From the first moment we glanced at each other, There could never on this planet be another, We were meant to be together, Forever and ever. We met at a wedding……………………., From the first dance when you drew me close, My heartbeat missed every second stroke, I fell in love that night, With such delicious delight. You gave me a brief kiss on the cheek, quite cheeky, For you had brought a date, but you were so dreamy, You took my hand and led me back to my chair, And introduced me to your cousin Claire. My happy face, my excitement she sensed, I could relax now, no guilt or feeling tensed, We danced from the moment we met, It was a night we talk about, we will never forget, How we danced In each other’s arms, Your good looks and charms, set off all my alarms. We bid each other goodnight, it was fate, It was also very late. Many years later, it was Valentine's Day……………………., One glorious day Elias phoned me And sent me flowers, I’ve been contemplating this call for hours, Are you free no fiancé, hubby or boyfriend? No I answered slowly and deliberately, It is therefore time I make you my wife, So we can be together, for the rest of our lives. Will you go on a date with me, Yes, I replied dreamily!

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Date: 2/20/2022 4:51:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... what a wonderful romantic tale that surely reads as fact is better than fiction. This poem must have been so easy to write for you - well done Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 2/20/2022 7:41:00 AM
Reading this romantic, lovely Valentine's Day tale was a delight, Jennifer. Best of wishes, Evelyn
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Date: 2/19/2022 6:44:00 AM
lovely romantic poem...
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Date: 2/18/2022 1:22:00 PM
Such a lovely romantic valentine piece of writing Jenny, you tell it so well with great imagery and expression too. Hope all is well, blessings and hugs, Gordon
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Date: 2/18/2022 1:00:00 AM
So lovely a Valentine wish that came true dear Jenny.... God bless you both with many more lovely days of togetherness dear friend... Belated Valentine's Day wishes to you... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 2/17/2022 7:35:00 PM
As usual i'm a preverbal mile behind everyone else, when viewing your wonderful poetry, now i'll go and read it. And yes 'It's not unusual' I'm gobsmacked once again...I believe reading this poetry, you deserve to be together for the rest of your lives. Keep Safe My friend...Harry.
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Date: 2/15/2022 12:58:00 PM
A lovely memory for the holiday; great rhyme scheme and just beautiful.
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Date: 2/16/2022 10:07:00 AM
Hi MLK, I know from your poems that you are sentimental and loving, so I do hope that you had an awesome Valentines Day hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/14/2022 12:39:00 PM
Happy Valentine's day, dear friend! Hope all is well... blessings and hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/15/2022 11:51:00 AM
John thank you my friend. Hope yours was awesome also hugs blessings Jennifer
Date: 2/14/2022 7:01:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, just wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day. Hugs.
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Date: 2/14/2022 10:42:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, Thank you Jennifer .Blessings my friend.
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Date: 2/14/2022 8:55:00 AM
Darling Darlene you are such a sweetheart - honored to know you! Hugs, Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/14/2022 4:50:00 AM
Thus the cherished moment came for you to tie the knot ! A dream come true ! Hope you enjoy every moment with him . May your love flourish and prosper, dear Jennifer!
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Date: 2/14/2022 8:58:00 AM
Thank-you Valsa such a very special comment, thank you my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/13/2022 1:23:00 PM
Oh I love this Jennifer! Such a sweet, loving story! Thank you for sharing , my friend :)
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Date: 2/15/2022 9:34:00 AM
Heidi, I feel proud to have been able to share it with you. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/13/2022 9:29:00 AM
Jennifer, this is so romantically beautiful!! What a wonderful story to read and imagine, Happy Sunday xxoo
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Date: 2/15/2022 11:47:00 AM
Hi Mike such an awesome comment thank you, very sweet! Blessings hugs Jennifer
Date: 2/13/2022 3:17:00 AM
Isn’t it a marvel when two people are meant to be together the universe arranges it to work out that way. I loved reading your Valentine story. Have a lovely Valentine’s Day tomorrow. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/15/2022 12:02:00 PM
Connie thank you my dear friend this wonderful comment has sincerely gladenned my heart as I know how close you and your husband were and that Is why your words meant so much to me hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/12/2022 10:08:00 PM
WOW! terrific romantic tale of true love. I'm glad you found each other. Smiles and Blessings, Bill
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Date: 2/15/2022 12:05:00 PM
Hi Bill great to see you, welcome your visit and thank you for a fantastic comment. Hugs blessings Jennifer
Date: 2/12/2022 8:13:00 PM
Nice to read that wishes still come true for us 'regular people!' ~ Jiminy Cricket
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Date: 2/15/2022 12:08:00 PM
Hi Gershon yes I'm living proof! Hope you are well my friend, hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 2/12/2022 5:41:00 PM
I love the romantic write and a very touching and wonderful poem. Happy Valentine's day to you and yours. love phyl
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Date: 2/16/2022 9:53:00 AM
Thank-you Phyllis - A lovely comment. Hope you had a perfect Valentines day. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/12/2022 9:30:00 AM
Jenny, you have written a gorgeous and touching poem. It was a pleasure to read. Happy valentine to you, my friend.
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Date: 2/16/2022 8:42:00 PM
Such a wonderful comment thank you from the bottom of my heart. Happy you a Great day yourself my friend.zzzHugs blessings Jennifer.
Date: 2/12/2022 8:18:00 AM
WoW! Jenny, What a beautiful poem to read this fine morning. It is so fitting for the Valentine’s day. You and your hubbies meeting at the dance was “ meant to be” wishing you and him many more year’s happiness and bliss. Happy Valentine’s Day! Have a nice day and weekend my friend from across the pond-Alexis
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Date: 2/11/2022 11:33:00 PM
I LOVE this story of you two coming together, and I could hear you tell it a thousand times... you were destined to be together and all it took was the right timing and two hearts open to love. Such a dreamy poem, Jennifer, it makes my heart sing. I love the line "Your good looks and charms, set off all my alarms" and every other line before and after it. Going in my faves, and I know it will bring a smile every time I read it again. Blessings and hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/11/2022 7:49:00 PM
Elias was lucky to get you, my dear... love at first is the best of all. Happy Valentines my friend to both of you. Hugs and blessings.
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Date: 2/11/2022 1:32:00 PM
A wonderful tale Jennifer, it was meant to be. Happy valentines day celebrations. Tom
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Date: 2/11/2022 1:04:00 PM
So beautiful! Dreamy and cheeky ;)
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Date: 2/11/2022 12:56:00 PM
Love is a many splendour thing. Happy Valentine Day.
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Date: 2/11/2022 12:10:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, Wow!!!Wow!! I never met anyone at a wedding. You were very lucky . Hugs, Darlene
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Date: 2/11/2022 9:56:00 AM
Beautiful!!!!!
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