Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Limerick

A Vacation Humor

Hume looked out from tenth floor ocean-view room
Called his travel agent, yelled with a boom
"Can’t see Ormond or Lyn?"
“Vast land” the agent grinned
“Don’t’ lie, Florida’s map looked thin” said Hume.

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**Inspired to write this on reading your to-day's blog on sky-diving

July, 22, 2014
Form : Limerick (10-10-6-6-10)
Dr. Ram Mehta
Seventh Place win
Contest: A vacation humor by Carolyn Devonshire

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Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 12:53 PM Dr Ram, Sweet smiles to you, sweet smiles to all.. Congratulations, on making Carolyn's Vacation Humor contest list. LOVE LINDA

James Fraser July 27, 2014 at 1:00 PM Many congrats Dr. Ram on your fine win with this quirky Limerick, James....

Roy Jerden July 27, 2014 at 9:14 AM He needs 3d glasses, I guess... Well done! Congratulations on your placement!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2014 at 8:25 AM Back again wid huge congrats Dr Ram!

Paul Callus July 27, 2014 at 6:25 AM Enjoyed your sense of humour, from a bird's eye view, DR! Congrats on your win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2014 at 2:01 PM Congrats on your win. Nicely rhymed!

Sara Kendrick July 26, 2014 at 1:45 PM Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire July 26, 2014 at 12:03 PM Well done, Dr. Ram! Enjoyed your reference to our "vast" state looking "thin." Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Verlena S. Walker July 23, 2014 at 10:35 PM Nicely written... GL in the contest Dr. Ram... Enjoyed this Limerick... Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 22, 2014 at 8:53 AM Lovely limerick dr Ram ! Gl in contest !