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A Vacation Humor

Hume looked out from tenth floor ocean-view room Called his travel agent, yelled with a boom "Can’t see Ormond or Lyn?" “Vast land” the agent grinned “Don’t’ lie, Florida’s map looked thin” said Hume. +++++++ **Inspired to write this on reading your to-day's blog on sky-diving July, 22, 2014 Form : Limerick (10-10-6-6-10) Dr. Ram Mehta Seventh Place win Contest: A vacation humor by Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 7/29/2014 12:53:00 PM
Dr Ram, Sweet smiles to you, sweet smiles to all.. Congratulations, on making Carolyn's Vacation Humor contest list. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2014 1:00:00 PM
Many congrats Dr. Ram on your fine win with this quirky Limerick, James....
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Date: 7/27/2014 9:14:00 AM
He needs 3d glasses, I guess... Well done! Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 7/27/2014 8:25:00 AM
Back again wid huge congrats Dr Ram!
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:25:00 AM
Enjoyed your sense of humour, from a bird's eye view, DR! Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 7/26/2014 2:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Nicely rhymed!
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Date: 7/26/2014 1:45:00 PM
Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 7/26/2014 12:03:00 PM
Well done, Dr. Ram! Enjoyed your reference to our "vast" state looking "thin." Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/23/2014 10:35:00 PM
Nicely written... GL in the contest Dr. Ram... Enjoyed this Limerick... Verlena
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Date: 7/22/2014 8:53:00 AM
Lovely limerick dr Ram ! Gl in contest !
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