A Used Heart Playing the Blues

This instrument called my heart That used to play love songs just for you Is now old,worn and tattered Barely even able to carry a tune Beautiful love songs it used to play Have now been turned to blues From a woman I used to love That has torn my heart in two Melodies that would always flow From a heart that was always so true Now broken it hurts to even play From a heart that's been so abused Through loneliness a heart gets worn Without all the love it was so used to Leaving beautiful memories that are now forlorn Almost unable to even play the blues A sad song will still play on Through these words that I call the blues From a heart that used to play love songs With all my heart,that were just for you
DannyBoy:2-10-13

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Date: 2/15/2013 4:40:00 PM
Dannyboy Blue, you got them blues down pat....very well written! Hugs
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Date: 2/12/2013 6:44:00 PM
sad and beautiful! Love the flow. had me singing the blues right along with you. Brilliant write Dan!
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Date: 2/11/2013 7:53:00 PM
You've surely freed your blues on this beautiful verse! It flows so well, just like a sad song. I could feel your pain. .... Always, Laura
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Date: 2/11/2013 2:13:00 PM
I echo these comments: great flow, touching, sad and well written! And now I feel as though I could sing the blues too! (but in a good way, lol) :) Tanya
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/11/2013 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Tanya.. Let those blues fly free. :o) Nice to see you again...
Date: 2/11/2013 11:48:00 AM
Excellent flow here DannyBoy..!! I love this write of yours.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/11/2013 7:17:00 PM
Well...well. Howdy stranger! Thanks for the compliment.And I'm still waiting for your next fine write Pace...
Date: 2/11/2013 9:06:00 AM
(Is this one of "life's issues" that you have referred to???) Beautiful 'flow' and 'rhythm', Dan... Sad but full of feeling!... Terry (Very nice)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/11/2013 7:15:00 PM
Ha,ha...No,I think it came about buy seeing the word "Blues" the last couple of days?Thanks for stopping by,with the nice comment.
Date: 2/11/2013 6:05:00 AM
Touching.... but a lovely poem, Dan. - Well done. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/11/2013 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise...oxox :o)
Date: 2/11/2013 2:25:00 AM
the great consolation is great poetry comes, when a sensitive poet is hurting, been kicked in the guts n dropped on me butts ....myself...great poetry here mate...
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/11/2013 4:42:00 PM
Thanks Don,always a joy to read those comments.
Date: 2/10/2013 8:25:00 PM
Sad and beautifully written. I especially like the "blues." Jack
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/11/2013 4:41:00 PM
Hey Jack,glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/10/2013 7:53:00 PM
I feel like I have taken a trip to New Orleans. You created a wonderful blues mood with this fine piece. I like it a lot Dan
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/11/2013 4:40:00 PM
Thanks Richard...
Date: 2/10/2013 4:18:00 PM
you sure tugged at heart strings, yours maybe, or just the readers. Forwarding some muscle repair spray, well thats all a heart is isnt it a muscle...Seren
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/10/2013 7:14:00 PM
Thank you Seren...Oh the heart is so much more than just a muscle. :o)
Date: 2/10/2013 3:36:00 PM
But, ..you just did it...you played the blues !! The blues in words... enjoyed the read.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 2/10/2013 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Debra...Glad you enjoyed it. :o)
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