Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- a Twelve Months Pregnancy -

Hello January
     A whole year is over 
     A pregnancy of twelve months 
     with all the symptoms 
     Time is running like a marathon 
     The birth is started 
     The new year is here 
     again with new hope 
     expectations- joy and tears 
     Burning colorful stars 
     flashes in our eyes 
     Fireworks in the sky 
     like the sunlight
     gives a warm pleasure 
     Just a few seconds 
     All the church bells ringing 
     Smile ... kisses and hugs 
     We are ready - we are waiting  
     Please welcome the newborn year 




Sponsor:Vicky Tsiluma
Contest Name:Hello January 
Deadline:2/1/2014 12:00:00 AM



18.01.2014
A-L  Andresen :)

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Gail Debole March 12, 2014 at 5:24 PM Excellent title. The way you express this concept is charming and so creatively honest! - Love, Gail Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2014 at 3:35 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Gail. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Emmanuel Brian Oule February 15, 2014 at 2:39 PM Fireworks in the sky, i loved that stanza and yes New resolutions, Like mine is to complete my screenplay, Already im writing my third movie.. Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2014 at 4:30 PM - Thanks for the S-mail. Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2014 at 4:29 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - Good luck with your work,Bryan. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins February 1, 2014 at 8:59 AM Oh my gosh Anne Lise - Your words sing in this creative gem. I love 12 month pregnancy. Bravo! love, Kathy Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2014 at 9:29 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kathryn. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sarai Virden February 1, 2014 at 5:30 AM Loved your metaphor. Didn't know what to expect and was swept away by the beauty of your message. A wonderful write sweetie. Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2014 at 6:26 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sarai. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso January 31, 2014 at 10:03 PM This is a very original piece. I had no idea what to expect from the Title, and my curiosity was pleasantly rewarded!! A great poem! Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2014 at 6:25 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Arthur :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Darren Watson January 29, 2014 at 3:16 AM When I saw the headline I thought , ''Never '' That poor woman . lol Delighted I opened the poem . Thoroughly enjoyed it . Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2014 at 3:21 AM ....lol.. - Highly appreciate your visit and comments, Darren. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Rogers January 28, 2014 at 12:18 AM Very nice metaphor, you had me going for a minute!...smile. Nice work! Anne -Lise xoxoxo Robert Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2014 at 2:51 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and comments, Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin January 24, 2014 at 2:19 PM Leaving 2013 exhausted but the baby is beautiful, just like your poetry! Hugs, chuck Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2014 at 2:20 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak January 24, 2014 at 7:19 AM This is very creative. Great comparison between birth and a new year. Should do well in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2014 at 11:57 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pace Ink-U-Script January 23, 2014 at 7:03 AM An excellent creative write!!! :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2014 at 7:54 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Pace INK. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Deepak Chalise January 23, 2014 at 6:56 AM The way you put words for new year is welcoming. INCLINATION TOWRADS SPIRIT AND LOVE IS LIFE.This is the hub of poem how a poet adorns it. I loved very much. . Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2014 at 7:54 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Deepak. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson January 22, 2014 at 5:11 PM a very different new year concept... very well done too xoxox Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2014 at 2:13 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Don. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock January 22, 2014 at 4:42 PM Nice way to bring in Jan. and a new year. I have been good so far this year from my winter flu. I am hopeful this will be a new and well year for me. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2014 at 2:13 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo January 22, 2014 at 3:27 PM Very good AnneLise. I do welcome the baby new year. I hope you a year full of blessings.... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2014 at 2:12 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Lucilla. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta January 21, 2014 at 8:40 AM Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, Anne Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2014 at 8:42 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton January 21, 2014 at 8:23 AM this is excellent Anne Lise it brought some much needed sunshine Shadow x smile hug Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2014 at 8:28 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway January 21, 2014 at 6:37 AM Awesome piece friend Anne :) ;) Congratulations on your win. I been very busy these past few days due to the deadline of my final exam. Miss to read some of your poems. Happy New year. hugs :) ;) Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2014 at 6:44 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Maria. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2014 at 10:38 PM I hope this one placed for you. I just saw the contest was judged. it sure is a delightful and creative poem in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2014 at 3:30 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Orozco January 20, 2014 at 10:06 PM Awesome poem!! Enjoyed this very much!! -Eddie Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2014 at 3:29 AM :)

Edward Orozco January 20, 2014 at 9:16 PM Awesome poem!! Enjoyed this very much!! -Eddie Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2014 at 3:29 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Edward. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 20, 2014 at 6:20 PM A firework of a poem! Joyful and captivating, hopeful and thought provoking. Yes, we should celebrate each year since we are alive! Excellent work ! Good luck dear Anne Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2014 at 3:28 AM Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kaye S- January 20, 2014 at 3:35 PM I never thought of it that way, you are so right. Hopefully this new born year grows into a healthy and vibrant one. Thanks for passing by my poem! Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2014 at 3:38 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kaye. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faaiqah Abader January 20, 2014 at 3:05 PM Well-done Anne-Lise, a lovely poem! Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2014 at 3:07 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Faaiqah. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit January 20, 2014 at 12:30 PM Congratulations on your win, Anne Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2014 at 2:01 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 20, 2014 at 12:11 PM Congrats on a fine win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2014 at 2:02 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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