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A Try-Hard

A try hard In getting attention In achieving social validation Just so she didn’t feel left out An outcast But she was pretending Never actually feeling satisfied And she yearns Taking that mask off her The one which others call as ‘ideal’ But she was afraid Of social perception And she was afraid That others would not like her So she kept on wearing That same mask over and over

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Date: 5/3/2016 10:05:00 PM
Amirah, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2016 12:26:00 PM
Hi Amirah Halim, Nice & amazing first post. Welcome to poetry Soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/30/2016 9:31:00 AM
Ps ... I feel sad you feel this way about yourself. It must be tough hiding in the shadowS, yet trying SO hard....you have to admit it fits your situation. The best poem I've read this morning ..pd
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Date: 4/30/2016 9:27:00 AM
Another NiceS One, You must be very poetic.... I like this Account name of your, Amirah,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/30/2016 7:57:00 AM
Masks are used to hide something and silence the past. Fairly Accurate
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