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A Trustworthy Transient

On my way home waylayers waylaid me and repeatedly ravaged me ravenously, It was a dark, dreary and dreadful dusk and I was alone, lonely on a lonesome lane. Wasted and waived by the wayside I was wallowing in wrath woefully, Until a wayfarer wandered my way and wondered what with me befell. Lost and yet livid with lingering ire by the wanton ways of the waylayers, I gave in gratefully to his generous grip of my hand and heaved myself upright and hugged him heartily. ~03/29/2018 ~Alliteration contest by Silent One

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Date: 4/3/2018 9:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Abdul, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2018 3:53:00 PM
What great flow to your sordid tale. A most endearing poem. Congrats on your well deserved win, Abdul.
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Date: 4/3/2018 7:51:00 AM
Great alliteration, Abdul. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 4/2/2018 8:10:00 PM
Great use of alliteration Abdul! Congrats on your win!! Best, Judy
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/3/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Judith.
Date: 4/2/2018 6:34:00 PM
An awesome alliteration poem, Abdul. You tell your story of receiving a helping hand in great poetic style. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes..
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/3/2018 10:08:00 AM
I appreciate your perceptive comment. Thanks a lot Susan.
Date: 4/1/2018 3:19:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Abdul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 3:01:00 PM
Great use of alliteration Abdul.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Date: 3/29/2018 3:47:00 PM
Well done! A great story! Fantastic alliteration striking just the right tone!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/1/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Kim.

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