A True Tale - Adeleke - Toyin

A true tale; to trust, to tell
are thou my darling damsel,
thy blue, blissful bell
wakes our world, so  wise and well!


A magnet made for terrific Teewhy my Love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 5:39 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol
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March 13, 2011 at 6:45 PM
This is written well, and clear as a bell. Congratulations on winning in the contest, Adeleke
Freeman Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Great to see you near the top with this honorable win in sixth place. Congratulations on your honored win. Agape, Moses
Neels Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 1:19 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest Adeleke :)
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March 12, 2011 at 11:46 AM
This is such a lovely poem, Adeleke. Congratulations on your win! And thank you for stopping by. Of course I still miss my late husband, but I know it won't be too long before we are reunited. Keep the faith, dear. Love, Carolyn
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March 12, 2011 at 7:31 AM
Congrats Adeleke on your win with this cute write!---kashinath
Adeite Avatar
March 12, 2011 at 2:49 AM
Thanks everyone.
Horsman Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 11:43 PM
interesting poem is this, enjoyed. congrats. Harry
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 10:24 PM
So is it Teewhy or Toyin? Sounds delightful. Is it a girlfriend, Adeleke? It almost sounds like you are describing a blue flower. Congratulations.
Johnson Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 7:48 PM
Great saying for your sweet damsel. Congratulaions. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Adeleke
Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 4:09 PM
Congratulations..Sara
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March 11, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Congtats my dear on your win!!!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Congrats Adeleke on your success in my magnet contest with this stunning entry luv.. thankxx for your support always..
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 10:28 PM
awesome story with such delicate and charming lines, adelke.. i like, like!! best winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette
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