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A Truce Hovers In the Air

An uneasy truce hovers in the air combatants tense, no soldier dares to catch a minute's sleep the price of that, far too steep Minutes pass, they feel like hours searchlights flare o'er watchtowers The truce so far's held half a night soldiers curse to mask their fright...

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Date: 2/4/2023 7:47:00 PM
What they go through is humanities darkest hour. They fight in a fight chosen for them, their cause is not theirs, and their life given up doesnt effect those behind the chaos only control and depopulation and death.
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Date: 2/2/2023 5:59:00 PM
The fear is palpable in your poem!
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Date: 2/3/2023 1:47:00 PM
How the word-creators have wrecked 'Pal Pablo!' lol.
Date: 2/2/2023 2:28:00 AM
Truce’s? I remember the many in Israel. Yeah they didn’t last long, did they? The PA determined to destroy Israel at any cost! Omar woukd do it in a flash Pangit x
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Date: 2/3/2023 1:46:00 PM
I think they misspelled truce and agreed to a 'trice,' as the truce would be over in a trice...

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