A Tribute To Banjo Pattersons, Road To Old Mans Town

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I read the poem "The Road to Old Mans Town" by AB (Banjo) Patterson, an Australian Poet, and decided I would try and make a tribute to it, hope this fits.

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A Tribute to Banjo Pattersons, Road To Old Mans Town
by Robert (Bob) Moore

I read a poem when I was young, by Banjo Patterson
called “The Road To Old Mans Town” about a life near done
I did not understand back then, the meaning was obscure
but as the years go passing by, I understand it more

He spoke of youth, and freedom, of time that had no end
of doing what we wanted, the future ours to spend
time to waste if that’s our want, not count hours as they fly
days that stretch into the distance, don’t yet go rushing by

But as the days grow shorter, and we begin to see
our life is not forever, and what will be will be
and we are sadly looking back, and slowly drifting down
the lonely road we all must tread, to Banjo’s Old Mans Town

He also makes a hope, that we are not alone,
that someone walks beside us, a love whom we have known
that God may not allow us, this dusty road go down
With faltering steps and whitening head, 
on the road to Old Man's Town!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/21/2017 6:38:00 PM
I did n't understand it then either, nobody does, until they become the permanent resident of the old man's town. Bob, that was great..
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Robert J Moore
Date: 3/21/2017 9:46:00 PM
I guess we are lucky if we become a resident Pashang, many friends and relatives do not, thank you for your comment
Date: 3/21/2017 3:30:00 PM
Written as so many poets would hope to write. Brilliant poem and I must fave this classic. A big bravo Bob!
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Date: 3/21/2017 6:26:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Keith, I find the Rhyme type of poem suits me best, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/21/2017 2:43:00 PM
This old man - 87 - know that road, know that tune. Love, daver
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Robert J Moore
Date: 3/21/2017 6:22:00 PM
Thanks Daver, at 75 I am fast becoming acquainted with it myself
Date: 3/19/2017 6:00:00 PM
I absolutely loved this Bob, I could see it being put to music. Being Australian, I guess I'm also a bit bias. I think Oz Poetic Society would love this, you should think of submitting it.
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Robert J Moore
Date: 3/19/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Maria, I have no musical ability, so I dont think that will happen, I have not heard of the Oz Poetic society, but I will chase it up, thanks for the tip. You may enjoy some of my other Australian inspired poems-They Came Home Today-Gallipoli- and The First Fleet, are a few. x
Date: 1/29/2017 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful in it's own right without reading Banjo's piece. Brilliantly pined Bob, by far the best read I've had today would also work as a terrific lyric, thank you...
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Robert J Moore
Date: 1/29/2017 3:25:00 PM
thank you Charlie, read Banjo if you get time, I have Clancy of the Overflow above my desk in my study
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