Notes About The Poem

I read the poem "The Road to Old Mans Town" by AB (Banjo) Patterson, an Australian Poet, and decided I would try and make a tribute to it, hope this fits.

Listen to poem:

A Tribute To Banjo Pattersons, Road To Old Mans Town

A Tribute to Banjo Pattersons, Road To Old Mans Town
by Robert (Bob) Moore

I read a poem when I was young, by Banjo Patterson
called “The Road To Old Mans Town” about a life near done
I did not understand back then, the meaning was obscure
but as the years go passing by, I understand it more

He spoke of youth, and freedom, of time that had no end
of doing what we wanted, the future ours to spend
time to waste if that’s our want, not count hours as they fly
days that stretch into the distance, don’t yet go rushing by

But as the days grow shorter, and we begin to see
our life is not forever, and what will be will be
and we are sadly looking back, and slowly drifting down
the lonely road we all must tread, to Banjo’s Old Mans Town

He also makes a hope, that we are not alone,
that someone walks beside us, a love whom we have known
that God may not allow us, this dusty road go down
With faltering steps and whitening head, 
on the road to Old Man's Town!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Salehi Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 6:38 PM
I did n't understand it then either, nobody does, until they become the permanent resident of the old man's town. Bob, that was great..
Moore Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 9:46 PM
I guess we are lucky if we become a resident Pashang, many friends and relatives do not, thank you for your comment
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Written as so many poets would hope to write. Brilliant poem and I must fave this classic. A big bravo Bob!
Moore Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Keith, I find the Rhyme type of poem suits me best, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Austin Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 2:43 PM
This old man - 87 - know that road, know that tune. Love, daver
Moore Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Thanks Daver, at 75 I am fast becoming acquainted with it myself
Williams Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 6:00 PM
I absolutely loved this Bob, I could see it being put to music. Being Australian, I guess I'm also a bit bias. I think Oz Poetic Society would love this, you should think of submitting it.
Moore Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Thank you for your comment Maria, I have no musical ability, so I dont think that will happen, I have not heard of the Oz Poetic society, but I will chase it up, thanks for the tip. You may enjoy some of my other Australian inspired poems-They Came Home Today-Gallipoli- and The First Fleet, are a few. x
Smith Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Beautiful in it's own right without reading Banjo's piece. Brilliantly pined Bob, by far the best read I've had today would also work as a terrific lyric, thank you...
Moore Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 3:25 PM
thank you Charlie, read Banjo if you get time, I have Clancy of the Overflow above my desk in my study
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace