A Triad of Tanka V: Forever Her
That first piercing stare
Which shoved my young innocence
Into confusion.
Suddenly...my little pond
Was tipped into her ocean.
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On the way to work
I would linger in the streets,
Shopping in windows,
Hoping to catch a shy glimpse
Of breezing cloud wrapped in flame!
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The long road was wide...
But could not hold the whole World;
Though, at that moment...
It seemed to me that the road
Desperately strove to try.
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