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A Tree Like Me

A Tree Like Me This poem is in the CUBE16 form I created several years ago. I stand alone upon the plain all others gone just I remain I see the sky as clouds drift past the sun spreads warmth but will it last I've stood right here for fifty years no time before have I felt fears as darkness flows none else can see my loneliness a tree like me the men now come with blades of steel what will I hear what shall I feel this is my home through rain and snow what can I do where will I go as men begin I feel great fear when cutting starts the end draws near when people come they'll only see a furrowed land no tree like me

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Date: 2/28/2025 11:50:00 PM
Hello Robert :-) Very enjoyed read of your beautiful poem! Have a nice day, with best hope and wishes :-)
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 3/1/2025 11:31:00 AM
Thank you very much for your positive and uplifting comments about the poem. I am truly grateful. Robert
Date: 2/28/2025 2:12:00 PM
Beautiful poem!
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 2/28/2025 4:55:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Marylin. I am grateful for your positive and uplifting words.
Date: 2/28/2025 10:25:00 AM
It is a beautiful poem. Our life on this earth is exactly the same. At the end we have nothing but we are levelled to the ground.
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 2/28/2025 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, Judith. I am grateful for your positive and meaningful comments. Robert
Date: 5/19/2024 1:22:00 AM
Great rhyming and cadence Robert. I sense a poignant and strong environmental eco message about the ignorance of man and the consequences of such. I related it too to the system that pays little respect and sympathy to those who are about to become homeless. Your poetic form lends itself very well giving the feeling of a natural flow to your body of work. Cheers - Gary
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 5/19/2024 5:12:00 PM
Thank you, Gary. I am grateful for your insights into the narrative in this piece. The form is called CUBE16. I created it several years ago.
Date: 5/18/2024 7:14:00 PM
Great concept and nice form, Robert.
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 5/19/2024 5:03:00 PM
Thank you, Shane. The form is called CUBE16 and I wrote an article about the construction. A appreciate you complimentary words.

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