Terry O'Leary Poet Limerick

A Travelling Sage

There once was a travelling sage

Who yet lived to a very old age.

      Well becoming quite senile,

      With problems (yes penile),

The reader may choose:

1) He kept his packed trunk in a cage.

or

2) He packed his wee trunk in a rage.

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Robin Davis October 6, 2013 at 7:43 PM This is creative and fun. Full of humor and chuckles. cute and silly. nice job

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri March 21, 2013 at 2:55 AM Great fun to read

Jack Horne January 14, 2013 at 10:28 AM LOL, love the reader's choice punchline too - number two, I think : )

Kathryn Collins September 30, 2012 at 8:18 AM can't decide. Your mind can be dangerous.

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2012 at 6:35 PM yep, number two!!!

David Scott September 27, 2012 at 12:15 PM AGAIN LIKE AN OLD TALE COOL WRITE DAVIDSCOTT

Andrea Dietrich September 26, 2012 at 10:32 PM The second for me is definitely the better choice. But does it matter if it's packed or unpacked? Just saying "packed" makes for a better beat!! Terry O'Leary September 27, 2012 at 1:39 PM Thanks for the opinion and advice, Andrea! I've fixed it according to your inspiration... Terry

Jack Horne September 26, 2012 at 2:19 PM lol, love your limericks : )

Doris Culverhouse September 25, 2012 at 8:59 AM humorus.....

Kash Poet September 25, 2012 at 12:38 AM Hahaha...enjoyed this funny Limerick very much!

Jon A Cavanaugh September 24, 2012 at 9:57 PM This is hilarious. Wonderful Limerick

Stephen Parker September 24, 2012 at 6:36 PM I have a couple of extra lines for you. His ruddy trunk turning beige. His shrunken compartments could no longer engage.