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A Transformation Begins

Fishing masters
Clothed in white feathers...
They stalk in slow motion
And as they strike a pose
Everything rare and beautiful.
Round my heart and soul of bliss
A transformation begins,
At peace I am.


Constance
Motif: spiritual and nature (Great White Egrets)
02/27/2014

For contest, "Impress me with a Small Poem" by Giorgio A. V.

Copyright © Connie Gildersleeve | Year Posted 2014

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Nette Onclaud Date: 3/2/2014 4:03:00 PM such a soothing melody, connie... well expressed!.. huggs Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/28/2014 12:17:00 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Connie. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/2/2014 8:36:00 AM Anne thank your for the visit and for the congratulations. Much appreciated - Connie

Skat A Date: 2/28/2014 11:37:00 AM impressive win Connie............SKAT Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/2/2014 8:37:00 AM Skat thank you for the visit and congratulations. Much appreciated. I hope you're having a grand weekend - Connie

Carrie Richards Date: 2/28/2014 10:46:00 AM I love this......... we see the egrets from driving along the highway near our home, ....perched out in the grain fields. What a nice reminder this is! Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/2/2014 8:38:00 AM Carrie thank you for the visit and lovely comment. I hope you're having a wonderful weekend - Connie

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 2/28/2014 8:40:00 AM Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, connie Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/2/2014 8:40:00 AM Dr. Ram thank you for the visit and congrats. Much appreciated. I hope you're having a wonderful weekend - Connie

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 2/28/2014 8:30:00 AM Congrats Connie on the win . A brilliant one indeed. Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/2/2014 8:42:00 AM Kayods thank you for the visit and congrats. I'm humbled that you thought it was brilliant. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend - Connie

Russell Sivey Date: 2/28/2014 12:01:00 AM This is a beautifully written nature write my friend! You have delved into a spectacular poem! I really loved reading this harmonious piece this evening! The splendor of this amazing poem is focused upon here Connie! Great Work!! Login to Reply Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/2/2014 8:44:00 AM Russell thank you for the visit and lovely comment. I'm humbled. I hope you're having a wonderful weekend -Connie