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A Trance, Almost

I dwell not within, gaze not beyond, but compromise precisely on the shell. Scratch the earth, soil under my nails, while quickly the surface refills behind me and hardens itself before me. Stain my fingers green, pull the weeds, yet audaciously they grow right back or grow fiendish thorns as I approach. Wage losing war, battle the cold, hard steel, blacken my hands with the grease and oil of a myriad stubborn engines. I dwell not within, gaze not beyond, but compromise precisely on the shell. The fruitless struggle fritters my youth. 16th May 1998

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Date: 8/1/2018 7:07:00 AM
Excellent write, Lawrence! Fantastic imagery that I can relate to. All the best...Charlie
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/1/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Charles, I'm glad you like it. The Stetson is properly cool, by the way.
Date: 7/19/2018 8:35:00 PM
A rumble within reading this. Excellent piece. xomo
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/22/2018 2:57:00 AM
Thank you, please rumble.
Date: 7/18/2018 9:01:00 AM
Exceptional imagery. I see you have been writing for a long time.
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Date: 7/18/2018 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Richard, all of your comments have been very welcoming and welcome. I value such positive feedback from a stalwart such as yourself.

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