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A Tossing and Turning Night

In a tossing and turning night, to wake up I forgot Never slipping from a series of perpetual dream A strange situation over and again, escape I could not In the fabric of this woolgather, I couldn’t tear the seam A speech in front of hundreds, I yearned to scream Standing in my underwear, my shaking voice was caught Closing my eyes tightly, trying to change the theme In a tossing and turning night, to wake up I forgot Skating across the ice, I wind up to take my shot I miss the net completely, letting down the team I’m stuck in a roar of booing heckles, an onslaught Never slipping from a series of perpetual dream Shut these lids again, restarting in a shallow stream Running with aching legs amidst a forest, I am shot A hunter hovers over me, to finish his prey I deem A strange situation over and again, escape I could not With the bang I take off again, sprinting on the spot There is no ground below, I plummet from a height extreme Anticipating the collision, pinching to change the plot In the fabric of this woolgather, I couldn’t tear the seam Is it over? Am I out of this self-induced figment regime In a jolt and thud, I reach the cloth of bed that I’ve sought A sigh of exhaustion and relief, I’m all out of steam Bedding and pillows askew in the chaos that I brought In a tossing and turning night. June 6th, 2022 A RONDEAU REDOUBLE POEM Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Date: 6/8/2022 7:34:00 PM
"In a tossing and turning night". We have all been there before. You certainly create the scene with your words. These dreams. More of a work out, if you ask me. Congratulations Hat, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/8/2022 5:49:00 PM
Such a fine and descriptive piece Hat, with great imagery and insightfulness throughout so deserving of the LORD which I congratulate you on. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 6/8/2022 5:20:00 PM
Hat, wonderful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 6/8/2022 2:07:00 PM
What a night it was, enjoyed the read Hat. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 6/8/2022 10:35:00 AM
Great, thanks
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Date: 6/8/2022 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a night and Creative write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Date: 6/8/2022 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Hat. You're quite the dreamer. Soundes like too much chocolate to me. Well-written and good entry for the contest. Good luck! Bill
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Date: 6/8/2022 3:59:00 AM
A great poem….congratulations on your POTD win Hat…..enjoy! Debx
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Date: 6/8/2022 12:37:00 AM
And you wake up feeling spooked for the rest of the day. Congratulations Hat on your POTD honours Tom
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Date: 6/6/2022 3:53:00 PM
Hello Hat Buckert, I wonder if you ate something before going to bed. That would bring the nightmares on. I am just wondering. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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