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A Tortured Mind

as rain beats against my window pane~
thoughts of an old love plague my brain




















05/12/2022
Alexis Y.

heartbreakcrystalline

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Bill Baker

June 6, 2022 at 3:47 PM

Raindrops keep falling on our hearts. Move on, the next step is always to love again. Hugs, Bill

Andrea Dietrich

May 19, 2022 at 9:12 AM

I really like what you did with this little form. WEll done, Alexis.

Michelle Faulkner

May 18, 2022 at 1:18 PM

Yes, those thoughts of the one who got away, come more frequently on a rainy day!

Mike Gentile

May 15, 2022 at 6:22 AM

Rain has a way to ti that Alexis ! I enjoyed your contemplative write! Hope you are enjoying your Sunday!!

Anil Deo

May 15, 2022 at 2:43 AM

Yes, yes, and anything, especially God's variety in weather, bring associations. There are NO MISTAKES in the Universe. Reject & rebuke torture ... in the completed work at Calvary (as we sing, JESUS PAID IT ALL , ALL TO HIM I WE ... He washed (Me) white as snow) shalom shalom in HIM< resurrected King

Mystic Rose Rose

May 14, 2022 at 12:12 PM

sometimes it can settle into your soul for a very long time, praying that one day a new love enters and erases the pain away, with love and passion, of the truest kind Alexis

Heidi Sands

May 14, 2022 at 8:56 AM

It is so easy to have old memories be triggered to surface. Well done Alexis! :)

Jennifer Proxenos

May 14, 2022 at 5:40 AM

Different events, different weather patterns, different people, can all trigger memories and bring them racing back. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Supraja Kannan

May 14, 2022 at 2:13 AM

That's a great imagery... Thanks for sharing the wonderful crystalline,Alexis...

Sara Kendrick

May 13, 2022 at 6:21 AM

Ahh!! I wonder if the tears flowed with the rain or if it was thoughts of I am glad that relationship did not go any further. I enjoyed reading it and it did bring questions to mind so a good work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Panagiota Romios

May 12, 2022 at 3:37 PM

Golly,how true Alexis Beautifully versed! Awesome. Pangie

Joseph May

May 12, 2022 at 1:05 PM

Memories on a rainy day, Nicely penned Alexis

Sam Kauffman

May 12, 2022 at 11:55 AM

Amazing how a stormy day can take us back to unresolved relationships provoking deeper thoughts and memories. So well spoken. Blessings of peace to you