A To Z of Partying - Ap

At Blitzen’s Christmas Dances Everyone Fields Glances
However, It Just Keeps Lecherous Men’s Nuances
Out Pacing Quietly Reserved Shy Things
Until Vodka Wields Xmas Yuletide Zings 



6 November 2021
For Contest: Alphabet Soup
Sponsor: William Kekaula
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Too funny…those famous Blitzen dances! Congratulations!
Flood Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Thanks, Kim. Ahh, vodka, answer to all ills and the cause of many! Terry
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 12:06 PM
thanks for the giggle! sounds like the office Christmas party :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Flood Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Thanks Jan. You’re on the way to being a regular souper again. Nice to see. Terry
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November 18, 2021 at 10:05 AM
This is just delightful Terry AND it rhymes. Nice work. Got to watch out for those Christmas office parties! :s! Congrats and high fives!
Flood Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Thanks Sam. If those stationery cupboards could talk what tales they would tell…. Shame I wouldn't be in any of them. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Peck Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 3:19 PM
Sounds like the parties where I used to work :) Very cleverly written. Congratulations!
Flood Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 4:09 PM
Once, a firm I worked for had a Christmas party with a free bar. The place was heaving (it was a big firm) so to save repeated refills….. wait for it, wait for it… they were serving wine in pint glasses. I kid you not. I got home… don’t know how, or when, but I was there in the morning so I guess auto-pilot kicked in. Glad you enjoyed, Ann. Terry
Goldsmith Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a fun story/write. Have a blessed day........
Flood Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Thanks, Paul’s. Thought Xmas might disqualify it, but it sneaked through. Terry
Alex Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 11:38 PM
Wonderful poem on Alphabets. Congratulations!
Flood Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. Terry
Faulkner Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Hi Terry, this is a party I can enjoy - extra credit fo the clever rhyming also - congrats on your win~
Flood Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Sorry… the vodka’s mine, all mine… (HIC!!). Thanks, Michelle. Terry
Leiser Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:34 PM
Congrats on your win, Terry! :)
Flood Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Thanks, Laura. Terry
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 5:31 PM
I enjoyed the frankness of your writ, Terry, as some office party had no purpose to them or when they extend to nearby taverns! Until you're next day's gossip -- ahh, the purpose? My compliments on your placement in my contest, Aloha!
Flood Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Thankyou, William, for settling my dilemma… XMAS is now officially a word! ;-) Terry
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 3:41 PM
hey hey hey. I really like this! I hope it does not matter if we wrote across the lines or downward like I did it!!
Flood Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 4:27 PM
I doubt that matters, but (and i claim no level of genius for this unexpected result) have you noticed how your poem looks more symmetrical with the changed word. Glad you liked this, Andrea. Terry
Rose  Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 4:00 PM
Your poetry zinged me, lol
Flood Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 5:17 PM
Well, you can’t beat a good zing-a-long at a party. Terry
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Clever indeed! Well earned!
Flood Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Thanks Rico… kept going at this thinking… there has to be an xyz to this… and finally sussed it. Hope I get away with ‘Xmas’, I’d say it’s 50/50. Terry
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November 6, 2021 at 12:16 AM
Brilliant Terry, this is the best I've seen. Good luck Tom
Flood Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 7:53 AM
Thanks, Tom. Wasn’t worrying too much about rhyming at first, but couldn’t bring myself to submit it without at least an attempt at rhyming. Cheers Tom. Terry
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November 5, 2021 at 7:14 PM
Oh, wow...well, I reckon I can withdraw mine, eh? This is clever, cute, and makes perfect sense. Super good job, Terry!
Flood Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Thanks, Milt. At first I misunderstood the remit and thought it had to be in alphabetical order. By the time I realised it could be in any order I had three attempts on the go, all of which were stuck on xyz. Glad you enjoyed this… cos it was starting to do my head in. Terry
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