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A Tiny Sand Crab

a tiny sand crab burrowing deeply beneath hot sands sunbathing at the seaside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 4/13/2023 9:43:00 PM
So smart that little crab, he knows what to do. This poem is so little, like it's main character. It is the first Tanka poem I have read. They look difficult to write. This was a cutie!
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Date: 2/13/2023 8:35:00 AM
As they do! Wonderful!
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Date: 2/13/2023 8:25:00 AM
Very descriptive, M. L. Janice
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Date: 2/12/2023 6:12:00 PM
Only a poet could see 'sunbathing' in this depiction. Adorable and admirable, M.L.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/14/2023 4:01:00 PM
Ah, but I love nature and she teaches us many things. Thanks Gershon.

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