A Tiny Christmas Gift

The mouse awoke to organ music.
“strange”  he thought “it’s not Sunday.”
He stirred listlessly
Reawakened by the sound
Of scurrying…whispering
A baby crying…???

On opening his eyes
He gasped….
Two large, brown eyes
Stared over an open mouth.
He froze….not fear
But wonder…

A huge commotion followed.
Nothing to do with him.
Just the preacher
Whispering in his deep voice
And….singing….
He loved the singing
Mostly the hallelujah’s
And the one with the loooong  Gloria’s.

He listened for the shuffling
The drone of the people leaving
Peaking out….
He saw those eyes again
The mouth whispered:
“Merry Christmas”.
A small hand left a broken cookie.

The mouse leaned back
Into the arms of the baby
The lights dimmed in the church
The small hand waved goodbye
The boy and the mouse smiled.


©11/25/2022

Writing Challenge - Write A Christmas Poem
Sponsor - Constance LaFrance
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Kauffman Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 10:40 AM
What a sweet, and very creative, poem, John. Delightful and delectable! All the wondrous mystery of Christmas flows from your words. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of joy to you!
Alex Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 8:21 PM
"The boy and the mouse smiled" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 1:33 AM
John, a delightful poem, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Write A Christmas Poem, well done, blessings
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 2:46 PM
Like Ann Peck said, PRECIOUS. Kids need stories like this for Christmas!
Peck Avatar
December 3, 2022 at 10:15 AM
What a precious poem, John. I love it!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 5:06 AM
Amazing write. I just love this. God bless you. Love, Gina
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 25, 2022 at 4:16 PM
Hello John , I love the ending. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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