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A Timeless Waltz

In a timeless waltz
Blue green gown flows, white lace edge
Radiant lighting

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/11/2013 3:10:00 PM

beautiful haiku - love it

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/5/2010 12:14:00 PM

this is beautiful Audrey :) love the imagery it holds...thanks for believing in my poems :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/2/2010 8:06:00 PM

a beautiful spotlight!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/1/2010 4:14:00 PM

pretty haiku-keep sharing.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/31/2010 4:06:00 PM

Congrats, Audrey! Live is a timeless waltz!!! Well written Haiku! Enjoyed reading it and thanky for your comments. Love, Gert

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/31/2010 9:28:00 AM

Hi, Audrey, this has a nice easy flow to it. Minor, but solid. Listen, I didn't get the e-mails that ytou and Jimmy sent me on 3/21 AND 3/23 due to server error. Sorry> Do you want to try again or should I send you my email here at the house? Regards, Gerard

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:05:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie, a job well done. Agape,Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2010 7:24:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/29/2010 3:45:00 PM

congrats on the win!! Good write!

Brian Strand

Date: 3/29/2010 12:02:00 AM

Audrey thanks for your welcome comments & kind words today.Rgds Brian

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/28/2010 9:07:00 PM

Awesome imagery of the ocean by the shore! Audrey! Excellent wording. I love it. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your continued great comments on my poems and your friendship. Best wishes, your friend in poetry, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 7:46:00 PM

Dear BBF ..the soup mail from JAM had server error message so did not get the content.. want to send again? am going to PP now..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/28/2010 5:02:00 PM

Beautiful, unique and 'Timeless' take on Raul's picture!... Not surprised it was one of the winners! - Tim

Marty Owens

Date: 3/28/2010 10:18:00 AM

Audrey this is beautiful...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/28/2010 8:45:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

James Fraser

Date: 3/28/2010 8:27:00 AM

Audrey, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> wonderful words describing the picture >> James

Daver Austin

Date: 3/28/2010 8:25:00 AM

Romantically you can fit a walt to nearly anything. Good write. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 6:53:00 AM

Well my BBF another beautiful win and placement in the Champagne Skies contest and a well earned and deserved trip to the winners circle... right behind u .. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of PS