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Poetry/Narrative/A Time Past - Story Poem
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1560-151-07
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, July 07, 2023
For the International Contest, Write A Story Poem
Sponsor, Joanna Daniel, Judged 07/25/2023

First Place

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A Time Past - Story Poem

 
In a time past there was a little girl, and though quite sad she liked to swirl and twirl; she lived with Grandma in an attic room, it was pretty but she was full of gloom. Mom was sick because she was very sad, and the place where Dad was dwelling was bad; you see my sister had tragically died, I felt so alone and each day I cried. Gran and Gramps had this really awesome farm, there were horses, chickens, pigs, lambs and charm; I helped pick vegetables and collect eggs, sometimes, the eggs hatched wings, eyes, beaks and legs. Gramps promised me I could have my own horse, if I proved- I could care for it, of course; I went to school on a big yellow bus, and at supper, the day we would discuss. The days passed and my sadness was going, because Gran and Gramp's love kept me glowing; Gran held me to her heart ... you leave today, grief rushed back and I wished to run away. I hid in the barn petting a cat nice, loved her lots, though she had a job killing mice; Mom found me and said- have bought a new home, its big and old with lots of rooms to roam. Oh, your room has a flower garden view, we brought all your dolls, teddies and toys too; well, I said- guess I could give it a try, goodbyes to Gran and Gramps made us all cry. I loved our home, it was old and big, in a huge garden Mom and I would dig; Dad made me stuff, chairs and a tea table, it had a workshop huge as a stable. Gran gave me some real tea cups for tea time. a teapot for tea parties anytime; I was happy, a beloved little girl, who again liked to jump, leap, twirl and whirl. Poetry/Narrative/A Time Past - Story Poem Copyright Protected, ID 07-1560-151-07 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France
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Mcintosh Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 12:07 PM
This is beautiful! Love it! Congratulations and God bless you. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Gina, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, love and blessings !
Flood Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Kids are nothing if not adaptable, Constance. A moving, nostalgic write and a worthy winner. Congrats. Terry
La France Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:07 PM
Terry, thank you so much for the compliment, congrats and comment, yes, it is amazing how love can heal a child !
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Happy/sad all at the same time. I enjoyed it. Have a great day...................
La France Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:08 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment, blessings !
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Such a heartfelt poem my friend. Congratulations on your win
La France Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:08 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !
Alex Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:30 AM
It's typical of Constance's story. So compelling. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment, congratulations and comment, oh yes, I do like to tell a sad story !
Volumes Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:34 AM
Congratulations Constance for your short story first place win.
La France Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Speaks, thank you so much for the congratulations, appreciate !
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:12 AM
Great story of your life, Constance, reminds me that there is a positive in every situation:) congratulations on top win:)
La France Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:10 PM
Joanna, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the compliment and congratulations !
Situation Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 4:06 PM
It's a good start.
La France Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 4:13 PM
TS, I know its beginning very sad, but it will turn happy by the end, thanks so much for the encouragement !
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