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A time for us

Golden was the zeal of twilight blushing appeal of your fervid glance When eventide’s scintillating aura revealed mystique of romance Upon horizon’s gamboge arc, glinting crimson on marigold skies As smile of your seductive eyes propelled vibes to sensuous highs. Enchanting was the evening, awaiting glimpse of amorous moon When magic of our first kiss attuned hearts in affectionate tune As allegory of love strummed rhythms, humming lyrics of astral delight Mesmerizing blossoming dreams in music of our passionate night. Harmonizing melodies warbled along, lauding sound of indelible song When we said our vows to announce, forever together we belong; As time keeps scripting eternal story, pages of albums memories fill, Blazing revelry in autumns and springs, a time for us, seasons thrill. August 25, 2020 Placed 1st: A time for us poetry contest Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Date: 10/3/2020 1:23:00 PM
Well penned, Vijay. Your words paint a perfect picture of their moments. :) Peace, Angie
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Date: 8/27/2020 8:27:00 AM
Vijay, impressive work. A lot of care was given to this. A striking poetic poem. Musical, rhyme, bulging with intense imagery. Top write, definitely worthy of its High Win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2020 5:11:00 AM
Much appreciate Sigrid--many thanks.
Date: 8/26/2020 8:08:00 PM
Your thoughts always caress the page like a breathtaking melody- especially those moments of romance and love. Tenderness and the soft touch of passion. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2020 5:16:00 AM
Always a delight to read your feedback my friend. Much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.
Date: 8/26/2020 9:12:00 AM
Oh that fervid glance... another poem full of romantic lines, you do these so well..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2020 1:56:00 PM
Much appreciate, SO--many thanks my friend.
Date: 8/25/2020 2:59:00 PM
Beautiful in so many aspects, Vijay. You never fail to deliver! Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Paul--much appreciate your kind feedback. Regards.
Date: 8/25/2020 1:40:00 PM
Colorful romance seems to spring from your every line Vijay, well done...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Charlie--much appreciate.
Date: 8/25/2020 12:09:00 PM
Hello Vijay Pandit, I enjoyed this poem. I read it and found it to be romantic. Enjoy ytour day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/26/2020 6:28:00 AM
Enjoy your day Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 1:27:00 PM
Much appreciate Darlene--many thanks.
Date: 8/25/2020 10:55:00 AM
Exellently written, Vijay. The sponsor should be very pleased with this one!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 1:27:00 PM
Thrilled by this lovely feedback--especially from you Andrea..much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 8/25/2020 6:32:00 AM
Outstanding romantic write..Vijay sir, As I always say...your the best who spills great love lines..:-)Enjoyed your excellent work. Have a beautiful day.:-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Deepa--you are very kind--much appreciate.
Date: 8/25/2020 6:24:00 AM
Such a beautifully touching romantic poem, Vijay:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 8:26:00 AM
Much appreciate, Jo--many many thanks.
Date: 8/25/2020 4:31:00 AM
- A beautiful and romantic poem, Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 8/25/2020 3:59:00 AM
Another romantic gem from your pen Vijay. You truly are the master of romantic verse. I don't think you'll need luck with this one. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 8:25:00 AM
So very kind of you Tom..much appreciate your vote of confidence--many many thanks.