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A Time For Us

Golden was the zeal of twilight blushing appeal of your fervid glance When eventide’s scintillating aura revealed mystique of romance Upon horizon’s gamboge arc, glinting crimson on marigold skies As smile of your seductive eyes propelled vibes to sensuous highs. Enchanting was the evening, awaiting glimpse of amorous moon When magic of our first kiss attuned hearts in affectionate tune As allegory of love strummed rhythms, humming lyrics of astral delight Mesmerizing blossoming dreams in music of our passionate night. Harmonizing melodies warbled along, lauding sound of indelible song When we said our vows to announce, forever together we belong; As time keeps scripting eternal story, pages of albums memories fill, Blazing revelry in autumns and springs, a time for us, seasons thrill. August 25, 2020 Placed 1st: A time for us poetry contest Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Valsa George

Date: 12/12/2021 3:25:00 AM

Love has bound them together and their lives have become indivisible. Let them dwell joyfully in a world of their own filling every page of life with memories of courtship and marital togetherness. You have made their life enviable!

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/3/2020 1:23:00 PM

Well penned, Vijay. Your words paint a perfect picture of their moments. :) Peace, Angie

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/27/2020 8:27:00 AM

Vijay, impressive work. A lot of care was given to this. A striking poetic poem. Musical, rhyme, bulging with intense imagery. Top write, definitely worthy of its High Win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2020 5:11:00 AM

Much appreciate Sigrid--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/26/2020 8:08:00 PM

Your thoughts always caress the page like a breathtaking melody- especially those moments of romance and love. Tenderness and the soft touch of passion. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2020 5:16:00 AM

Always a delight to read your feedback my friend. Much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.

Silent One

Date: 8/26/2020 9:12:00 AM

Oh that fervid glance... another poem full of romantic lines, you do these so well..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2020 1:56:00 PM

Much appreciate, SO--many thanks my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/25/2020 2:59:00 PM

Beautiful in so many aspects, Vijay. You never fail to deliver! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 3:57:00 PM

Thank you Paul--much appreciate your kind feedback. Regards.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/25/2020 1:40:00 PM

Colorful romance seems to spring from your every line Vijay, well done...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Charlie--much appreciate.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/25/2020 12:09:00 PM

Hello Vijay Pandit, I enjoyed this poem. I read it and found it to be romantic. Enjoy ytour day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/26/2020 6:28:00 AM

Enjoy your day Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 1:27:00 PM

Much appreciate Darlene--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2020 10:55:00 AM

Exellently written, Vijay. The sponsor should be very pleased with this one!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 1:27:00 PM

Thrilled by this lovely feedback--especially from you Andrea..much appreciate--many thanks.

V. Deepa

Date: 8/25/2020 6:32:00 AM

Outstanding romantic write..Vijay sir, As I always say...your the best who spills great love lines..:-)Enjoyed your excellent work. Have a beautiful day.:-)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/25/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you Deepa--you are very kind--much appreciate.