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A Time For Us

Golden was the zeal of twilight blushing appeal of your fervid glance
When eventide’s scintillating aura revealed mystique of romance
Upon horizon’s gamboge arc, glinting crimson on marigold skies
As smile of your seductive eyes propelled vibes to sensuous highs.

Enchanting was the evening, awaiting glimpse of amorous moon
When magic of our first kiss attuned hearts in affectionate tune
As allegory of love strummed rhythms, humming lyrics of astral delight
Mesmerizing blossoming dreams in music of our passionate night.

Harmonizing melodies warbled along, lauding sound of indelible song
When we said our vows to announce, forever together we belong;
As time keeps scripting eternal story, pages of albums memories fill,
Blazing revelry in autumns and springs, a time for us, seasons thrill.

August 25, 2020
Placed 1st: A time for us poetry contest
Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Valsa George Date: 12/12/2021 3:25:00 AM Love has bound them together and their lives have become indivisible. Let them dwell joyfully in a world of their own filling every page of life with memories of courtship and marital togetherness. You have made their life enviable! Login to Reply

Angela Crabtree Date: 10/3/2020 1:23:00 PM Well penned, Vijay. Your words paint a perfect picture of their moments. :) Peace, Angie Login to Reply

Sigrid Ermine Date: 8/27/2020 8:27:00 AM Vijay, impressive work. A lot of care was given to this. A striking poetic poem. Musical, rhyme, bulging with intense imagery. Top write, definitely worthy of its High Win. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/28/2020 5:11:00 AM Much appreciate Sigrid--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 8/26/2020 8:08:00 PM Your thoughts always caress the page like a breathtaking melody- especially those moments of romance and love. Tenderness and the soft touch of passion. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/27/2020 5:16:00 AM Always a delight to read your feedback my friend. Much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.

Silent One Date: 8/26/2020 9:12:00 AM Oh that fervid glance... another poem full of romantic lines, you do these so well.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/26/2020 1:56:00 PM Much appreciate, SO--many thanks my friend.

Paul Callus Date: 8/25/2020 2:59:00 PM Beautiful in so many aspects, Vijay. You never fail to deliver! Regards // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2020 3:57:00 PM Thank you Paul--much appreciate your kind feedback. Regards.

Charlie Smith Date: 8/25/2020 1:40:00 PM Colorful romance seems to spring from your every line Vijay, well done... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2020 1:41:00 PM Thank you Charlie--much appreciate.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 8/25/2020 12:09:00 PM Hello Vijay Pandit, I enjoyed this poem. I read it and found it to be romantic. Enjoy ytour day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 8/26/2020 6:28:00 AM Enjoy your day Vijay. Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2020 1:27:00 PM Much appreciate Darlene--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/25/2020 10:55:00 AM Exellently written, Vijay. The sponsor should be very pleased with this one! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2020 1:27:00 PM Thrilled by this lovely feedback--especially from you Andrea..much appreciate--many thanks.

V. Deepa Date: 8/25/2020 6:32:00 AM Outstanding romantic write..Vijay sir, As I always say...your the best who spills great love lines..:-)Enjoyed your excellent work. Have a beautiful day.:-) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2020 8:26:00 AM Thank you Deepa--you are very kind--much appreciate.

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/25/2020 6:24:00 AM Such a beautifully touching romantic poem, Vijay:) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2020 8:26:00 AM Much appreciate, Jo--many many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2020 4:31:00 AM - A beautiful and romantic poem, Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2020 8:25:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate your kind feedback.

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/25/2020 3:59:00 AM Another romantic gem from your pen Vijay. You truly are the master of romantic verse. I don't think you'll need luck with this one. Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/25/2020 8:25:00 AM So very kind of you Tom..much appreciate your vote of confidence--many many thanks.