A Thread of Time

We sat side by side on the greyhound bus,
we’d been on the road for a while,
he reached in his coat for a candy bar
offering it to me with a smile.

I declined but thanked him politely,
not knowing what else to say,
he looked at me and smiled again,
“You look so lovely today.”

Drowning in his soft brown eyes,
he spoke in a mellow tone,
he was headed west for a brand new start,
simply tired of being alone.
 
We pulled into a roadside café,
our attraction beginning to grow,
said he wished he’d met me sooner
and where was I six months ago.

Not wanting to lose the magic,
neither one of us wanting to sleep
we talked all night of dreams and desires
and promises vowed to keep.

His destination in view at dawn,
with neither of us prepared,
he squeezed my hand, drew me close
a passionate kiss was shared.

A swift embrace, a backward glance,
I knew I’d never feel quite the same
falling in love on a greyhound bus
not even exchanging a name.

I remember glancing through the glass,
seeing their arms entwine,
he disembarked to his destiny,
I stayed on board to mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 7, 2012 at 10:28 AM
LIZ,,,,;-) CONGRATULATIONS... NICE WORK IN PAULA'S CONTEST... ALWAYS~PD
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's "Miles" contest Liz. Love, Carol
Bunton Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 6:19 PM
Congratulations!
Quigley Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 8:17 AM
Wow Liz. So much said in so few verses. It was as if a life was lived on that bus. Congratulations.
Flach Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 8:34 PM
Terrific story, Liz. Well told and great rhyme. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Coincidently, I recently wrote a poem titled, "On a Greyhound Bus" - but the story is a little bit different.
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March 5, 2012 at 6:50 PM
Congrats on your win with this heartbreaker! A great write...blessings, Rhonda :)
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