A Thousand Years From Now

If someone leans upon an ancient tree
In future’s shade, a thousand years from now
Might they engage a wrinkle in the brow
And ponder over death of fallen leaves?

Are we not formed alike in fairness gained
Or time might choose to forge us enemies?
Would cloak, or hair, or skin of different blend
Invite your eyes to shun away from me?

If those born first, have greater weight to bear
Or yours, one day, the lift more heavy lot
Each step by step, we travel blind and torn
our crossroads come the same, or do they not?

Will one day find you leaning by a tree
And find a stone beneath the powdered dust
And wonder if it once belonged to me
To think it bone, or questions turned to rust?

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Iambic Pentameter........By Carrie Richards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/23/2019 1:45:00 AM
Wonderful!
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Date: 7/12/2016 11:21:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your "101 in a ROW contest -3 win." Love SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2016 3:59:00 PM
An excellent write and a pleasure to read, Carrie! Congrats on your 1st place win!
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:03:00 PM
Carrie: This is so sweeping in ideas and language. It catches at the soul. Congratulations on your 1st. place win. Always a joy to read your work, SuZ
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Date: 7/9/2016 3:22:00 PM
Wonderfully pictured of a period thousand years from now. A great poem my lovely smiling friend. A 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:35:00 AM
One of the best I've read on the soup. The last stanza is incredible. In classic form you've run away with this contest and most deservingly and refreshingly so. Congratulations Carrie, this has won a new follower...
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:32:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:22:00 PM
Deep, introspective, and hauntingly thought-provoking with an inspiring touch of nostalgia. Nice, very nice.
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Date: 9/23/2013 5:37:00 AM
Perfection indeed…Sara
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:42:00 PM
Hi Carrie, nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:27:00 AM
I always sense a rare beauty and richness in your poems, Carrie!! They give me great pleasure when I read them. Reading this again and loving it even more... Congrats on your awesome win!!
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Date: 9/21/2013 11:42:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on a great poem and a great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/21/2013 10:13:00 PM
Another excellent poem again from you my dear friend Carrie! Many hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Hugs and Cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/21/2013 6:55:00 PM
This one flows really well. It's nice read.
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Date: 9/20/2013 11:48:00 PM
Congrats on winning first place in the contest, Carri
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:16:00 PM
such a beautiful write ...your talent shines through in all your poems...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/8/2013 9:13:00 PM
Carrie, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:32:00 PM
Thanks for submitting it to my contest. This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Kim
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Date: 12/3/2012 9:56:00 AM
I just stumbled onto your poem. It is an incredible write. It is absolutely wonderful.
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Date: 7/28/2012 1:44:00 PM
congrats!!! nice poem :)
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Date: 6/18/2012 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2012 4:21:00 PM
CARRIE,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD
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Date: 4/24/2012 7:11:00 PM
Wow. That is beautifully written. I enjoyed it. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/28/2012 1:28:00 PM
Thank you for sharing with us this wonderful poem. Lucilla
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Date: 3/9/2012 9:53:00 AM
A very interesting poem and worthy of a great win... You are truly gifted.
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