A Thousand Years From Now

If someone leans upon an ancient tree
In future’s shade, a thousand years from now
Might they engage a wrinkle in the brow
And ponder over death of fallen leaves?

Are we not formed alike in fairness gained
Or time might choose to forge us enemies?
Would cloak, or hair, or skin of different blend
Invite your eyes to shun away from me?

If those born first, have greater weight to bear
Or yours, one day, the lift more heavy lot
Each step by step, we travel blind and torn
our crossroads come the same, or do they not?

Will one day find you leaning by a tree
And find a stone beneath the powdered dust
And wonder if it once belonged to me
To think it bone, or questions turned to rust?

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Iambic Pentameter........By Carrie Richards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Staton Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 1:45 AM
Wonderful!
A  Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your "101 in a ROW contest -3 win." Love SKAT
Merryman Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 3:59 PM
An excellent write and a pleasure to read, Carrie! Congrats on your 1st place win!
Delaney Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Carrie: This is so sweeping in ideas and language. It catches at the soul. Congratulations on your 1st. place win. Always a joy to read your work, SuZ
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July 9, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Wonderfully pictured of a period thousand years from now. A great poem my lovely smiling friend. A 7. Loved always, bl
Smith Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 8:35 AM
One of the best I've read on the soup. The last stanza is incredible. In classic form you've run away with this contest and most deservingly and refreshingly so. Congratulations Carrie, this has won a new follower...
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July 9, 2016 at 4:32 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
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January 19, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Deep, introspective, and hauntingly thought-provoking with an inspiring touch of nostalgia. Nice, very nice.
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 5:37 AM
Perfection indeed…Sara
A   Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:42 PM
Hi Carrie, nice Metrical verse win... luv~Linda
Phookan Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 8:27 AM
I always sense a rare beauty and richness in your poems, Carrie!! They give me great pleasure when I read them. Reading this again and loving it even more... Congrats on your awesome win!!
Johnson Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 11:42 PM
Congratulations Carrie on a great poem and a great win. Love, Joyce
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September 21, 2013 at 10:13 PM
Another excellent poem again from you my dear friend Carrie! Many hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Hugs and Cheers! love lots, Leonora
Robinson Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 6:55 PM
This one flows really well. It's nice read.
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 11:48 PM
Congrats on winning first place in the contest, Carri
Adams Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 8:16 PM
such a beautiful write ...your talent shines through in all your poems...congrats on your win :)
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May 8, 2013 at 9:13 PM
Carrie, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA
Morrison Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Thanks for submitting it to my contest. This is a wonderful piece of poetry. Kim
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 9:56 AM
I just stumbled onto your poem. It is an incredible write. It is absolutely wonderful.
Liwayway Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 1:44 PM
congrats!!! nice poem :)
Brown Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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June 17, 2012 at 4:21 PM
CARRIE,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD
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April 24, 2012 at 7:11 PM
Wow. That is beautifully written. I enjoyed it. Congrats on the win.
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March 28, 2012 at 1:28 PM
Thank you for sharing with us this wonderful poem. Lucilla
Eastman Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 9:53 AM
A very interesting poem and worthy of a great win... You are truly gifted.
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