A Thought

Slowly bring the pencil to a piece of paper.
Write the first word that’s comes to your mind,
Or, better still, draw something:
A tree, or, maybe, a forest.
Near the forest, a lake and a cottage.
Or better still, listen to the forest,
Listen carefully until you can hear the music of the woods.
Or better still, forget all these
And look upon the stars.
And count them, from the left to the right,
Or from the right to the left, 
Or in zigzag.
I know you cannot, 
But you have to try;
That’s how it feels when you’re playing with the infinite.



I’m lying to myself and keep telling myself I can.
It’s just my own way of saying “I love you”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 8:14 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:46 AM
catalin stefan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 12, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Catalin Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ...SKAT .
Tacito Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 10:00 AM
A simple, but gripping message here. The rise & fall of an "I love you". Very nice job!
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