A Terrible Trance

I saw the radiance of reality fading away,
the little stars were silent at night,
Cloud stole the rays of moonlight...
Dusk and dawn shared shades of gray.

In the midst of a furnace was a fountain,
my desires dried up on the platter of pain
never to be wet by dewdrops or rain...
Alas, there was a mansion on the mountain.

The arrow of our candle-light sparkles,
roses and rythym roused our room.
Love at first-night burst out in bloom...
My enslaved heart lost its shackles.

Vengeance was born by repentance,
regret was something I had to forget...
Losses are lost, I found an asset;
it was all a mirage, a terrible trance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gorelick Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Good to see you posting again.. and congrats.. BG
Kendrick Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 2:37 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Way to go.For sure we can't live in the past or future only in the present so regret doesn't have a place in the present...Sara
Rodgers Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Dark and haunting - congrats on your win
A. Sharma Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 10:23 AM
Loved to read a lovely write ! Congrats on top win Adeleke !
Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:25 AM
This has a mystical feel congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Nice flow of words and expressions. Congrats on a fine win, adeleke
Walker  Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 1:05 AM
Adeleke, well done... Enjoyed the mirage you beckoned... Verlena
Johnson Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 10:20 PM
Very intriguing Adeleke. Nice to see you in the winner"s circle. Love, Joyce
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April 9, 2014 at 8:43 PM
THANK YOU VERY MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS.... :) This was a very tough one to judge... GEEES, enjoy my latest blog if you like.... always & forever... Linda
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Wow Adeleke, what a wonderful poem! Congratulations on your first place win! Your poetry just keeps getting better and better!
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