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A Ten Word Challenge

This was written as another challenge by Silent One.  This one was in the form of using 10 words of his choice.

Colored Skies

I woke to skies of a deep sapphire hue,
very confused not to see shades of a lighter blue.
Something was amiss, then it turned to emerald green.
These were the most unusual evanescent skies I've ever seen.

Something heavy dangled on my chest.
A talisman of sorts from 'round my neck it did rest.
No fear did I hold of it, nor a plethora of any great dread.
Suddenly, the sky broke open and gleamed in a shade of radiant red.

A dulcet melody began to ring quite clear.
It came from the talisman; a chrysalis shaped sphere.
The sky morphed again, into a sunny glowing shade of yellow,
Such an idyllic setting to share with my love, my morning bedfellow.

In the purest state of felicity, we shared a kiss.
In rhapsodic conclusion, we were lost in heavenly bliss.
Above us the sky had restored itself into a deep sapphire blue
while in my lover's eyes I drowned. The talisman freshened our love anew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Hi Lin, you met Silent One's ten-word challenge so well with your lovely rhyming poem. Wonderful imagery with nice romantic feeling. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Thank you, Sandra. Your compliments are always so encouraging.
Richards Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 1:22 PM
I love what you did with this "Plethora" of words !! :) Truly, this is beautifully written, and I'm sure you enjoyed the challenge as much as I did. Thank you for stopping by my poem!
Lane Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Hi Carrie. Thanks for your sweet comments. They certainly are appreciated.
La France Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Lin, you took up the challenge and created an excellent poem, seamless in its beauty, it is so beautiful, well done, dear heart, well done~
Lane Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Thanks a bunch, BW...glad you like it.
Sage Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 4:35 PM
excellent write Lin...beautiful
Lane Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Thank you very much, sage.
Scars Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Lin, I saw this earlier at the store and wanted to pop back in and tell you what a marvelous job you did with the ten word challenge from Silent One. The flow is perfect and the rhyming is beautiful. Congrats on a job well done! *smiles* -luloo
Lane Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Thanks, Luloo. Amazing how different our writes are using the same words. ;)
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