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A Teddy Bear

I would like to be a teddy bear, So I could live a life that's fair. People would like to hold me, And feel my soft fuzzy hair. How wonderful it would be, To be a teddy bear. Completely at peace with God And without a single care.

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Skat A

Date: 6/21/2015 1:44:00 AM

wow, that is a very moving piece.. Enjoyed. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/21/2015 1:06:00 AM

Sheol, congratulations on your Prayer time Memory win. LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 6/20/2015 7:51:00 AM

This is charming - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Heather Secrest

Date: 3/6/2014 11:22:00 AM

Teddy bears do live the good life! Sweet poem full of warm emotions. Great write!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2013 3:34:00 PM

a very comfy cozy kind of poem. I sure loved MY teddy bear, pinky winky!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2012 1:27:00 PM

Hi Sheol, have you read my teddy-bear poem... You probably have.. i love your take on the wanting to be a comfort for children,,, but remember they see it all... love your verse.. and thank you for the kind visit.. xox~pd

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2012 3:43:00 PM

A few words, but they collectively tell a cute little tale.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 10/6/2011 9:41:00 AM

Beautiful poetry Sheol ,I think all of us would like to be at peace and happy .This is what I call a keeper it's pure poetry. Anne

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2011 6:44:00 PM

I like this one..It brought back a memory of a song from long ago..Most want that complete peace and many want peace with God..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/26/2011 4:08:00 PM

ahh but could a stuffed bear know God?? soft smile..light & love