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A Tear For Syria

The nation sprawls, prostrate: broken limbs, crumbling bodies; valley of vultures, cloud of flies, frisking scavengers. Victory throws a party for ghosts; a once boisterous land— now a silhouette of what was: a land of the dancing dead. The victor towers over rubbles, wearing rueful impish glee. He stands, stern, gaunt as death, tightlipped; grim irony on a face pondering the weight of victory as soot settles after an inferno, soothing the pain of death paling the pants for life. Civilization without humanity; blood turns muddy, red puddle, and bricks— homes for ghosts in a land once of the living. © 2017 Celestine Ikwuamaesi

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Date: 3/28/2017 9:09:00 AM
Sadly tragic and truthfully surreal. From a world away not being there to personally feel the full weight of this. We don't wrestle with things like this as much as we should... or the cost of war. We don't put enough time into counting the cost against humanity. Thank you for sharing this Celestine. It paints the picture we all fail to see.
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Date: 5/13/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thanks, Jesse. Maybe the world would soon see. Celestine
Date: 3/19/2017 1:11:00 PM
Powerful, tragic images you have used, Celestine. A well written poem of a horrible plight. Blessings, Kim
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Celestine Ikwuamaesi
Date: 5/13/2017 5:45:00 PM
Thanks, Kim, for your comment.
Date: 3/19/2017 9:21:00 AM
Wow Celestine, exquisite write; the language delivers thick penetrating emotion and imagery. A humble offering of 7 and blessings xomo
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Date: 5/13/2017 5:44:00 PM
Truth should stir the conscience however seared. Thanks, Maureen.

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