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A tear

Tears splash the paper Leaves an unimportant smudge An important death ©2014 by Regina Riddle

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Date: 8/29/2014 8:42:00 AM
Regina Such power and emotion in so few words. Tears are a very strong device to help us through the toughest times. thank you for the sweet comment on my Summer Sleeps poem.
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Date: 8/9/2014 3:15:00 PM
The arrival of bad news is usually accompanied by tears, especially when it is death. It is good to let emotions flow...soothes the heart. Very good haiku, Regina. Have a nice weekend. // paul
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Regina McIntosh
Date: 8/9/2014 10:59:00 PM
Thank you, Paul... God bless you and happy writing.
Date: 8/9/2014 12:48:00 PM
What a deep write, Regina. Tears are a language God understands. Do you know that song? Thanks for your visits today.
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Regina McIntosh
Date: 8/9/2014 10:58:00 PM
I'm not so sure about the song, but agree wholeheartedly that God understands our tears. Thanks for visiting me, too. God bless you.
Date: 8/9/2014 7:00:00 AM
Yes, please give once over the typo. A nice thought worth pondering over, Regina
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Regina McIntosh
Date: 8/9/2014 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Mehta. Much appreciation for your help... God bless you!!!
Date: 8/9/2014 4:53:00 AM
Lovely haiku Regina ! Second line plz check for typo error , shud be -- an unimportant -- hv a great day !
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Regina McIntosh
Date: 8/9/2014 7:39:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Sharma... I always appreciate your kindness and help... Much love and hugs, God bless you.